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That makes much more sense!

Off topic, but how is your writing going? Are you still in a block?

Haha. Well, are you? You don't seem like it to me at least.

That's great! And it's no surprise it didn't miss points. I'd be surprised it did miss points.

Well I really enjoyed it :)

SAY WHAT? That sucks ass. It was a great story :) I enjoyed it. So did she kill herself?

It was a beautiful sight, but sadly, there were no life it fill it.
It was a beautiful sight, but sadly, there was no life to fill it.

Thanks very much. I can't believe I missed that. I best I completely ruined the mood of the story. :(

But thanks, anyway!

Between 8 and 10 hours, most days. Sometimes I start and stop, writing down lines in between doing housework, etc. Other days I just sit at my computer until it's done.

0.o how does that work?

Hmm...you could always tell him to shove his dick up his own ass...

$500 and the kind of gloating rights I will probably forfeit. I do 10,000 words most days. The portion I devote to this wager is nothing.

I see. Well, I will let you know if I think of anything else to help :)

Oh boy, what does he want??????

-heh, I almost posted that comment on my wall again.

FUCKING DAMMIT!

I'm a failure -_-

Well, you just have to remember that it's your story and you can do whatever the hell you want with it, no matter what others think. Sometimes, the way I can get to the ending I believe others may think it weird, stupid or far-fetched to others. I've held back on 100% of things I write and post because of that. It's a terrible thing; I don't know if that's one of the things your worried about, but if it is then all I have to say is: whatever route you take to get to the epicness, it doesn matter because your writing is beautiful.

I want to get it over with as soon as possible and win this stupid bet (I'm ahead currently, as I'm closer to finishing, although it's ultimately based on quality/lack thereof). It only has to be 25,000 words. Given that I have tons of other work to do, I'm guessing I'll be able to wash my hands of it about a week from now. Or, never, depending on the long term memory of the internet.

This story will be the death of me. Only one more update today, I swear. Ugh.

I understand. How will you get them into one place? Maybe they start writing letters to each other and then they agree to meet at the island over the summer just like old times?

And thank you for telling me of the errors in my story, it helps considering I hate reading my own stuff just to find the errors. It is appreciated! And yes, I feel for Loki; the poor guy with all the smarts is compared to his brother who is quite dim-witted and arrogant just because he wasn't adopted and is older and...er hot? It is a shame that Loki let the jealousy get the better of him.

I ain't dissin' Thor, he is alright after he grows up at the end of the movie, but I have to say, Loki is more intriguing in my mind; evil or not.

Palm Trees should be an easy one considering it's a sequel and you have a lot of background you've set up, so lots of drama and stuff can happen. You could put your characters at a party, throw them into some clubs where they get drunk. They are adults as I remember, correct? Although, last I remember she was 18 or 19...so maybe a club wouldn't be possible...

FAKE IDs!

They could just hang out and that feeling regrow...

Maybe I should see what updates on your story I've missed before I go on a suggestion rampage. I have neglected Palm Trees, I hope your story can forgive me :/

YOU HAVE AN ELL--EEE-VAY-TOR? OMG! How big is your house?

And which stories are you having blocks on? I understand the feeling and I hope I can be a bit of help to get you out of it.

Not that I was ever told I was a good helper...ROTFL

I would love to have a large body of water in my backyard. That is so cool that you can do it whenever :D

Well, I definitely recommend you for anything. Your writing is pure bliss!

Omg! You lucky ducky! Canoeing sounds fun! Did you have fun? Me is envious of you XD

Thank you for checking it out.

What is with all this recommendation shtuff and what is with actual published books being posted under peoples usernames...I think it all showed under updates or something...I feel stupid XD

I psted two chapters >.< I'm on a roll!