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Thanks for the comment on Endless Summer. :)
Haha, for me, comparing his voice and laugh to honey and chocolate was a way of expressing that they were deep and soothing and sweet; like chocolate and honey. But I feel like just saying "his voice was soothing and rich" was less...poetic.

Hi, thanks for showing support on the two comment swap feature idea in my blog. Here is where you can find the Suggestions thread for it, and I hope you'll support it there too :)

thanks so much for finding that mistake on my story I ALWAYS mix up names haha. I'm glad you liked it, thanks also for actually reading it and not just giving a bs comment, I appreciate it <33

Thanks for yet another story comment! You're one of my favourite readers and I'm reccing you.

Thanks a bunch for the comment on The Dotted Line! ^w^ Especially for pointing out the waste/waist thing, I'm terrible at proofreading. :P I made the text lighter too, hopefully it's easier to read.

Hi thanks for commenting on Bye Bye Birdie.I actually made that layout on old Mibba and something must have happened on the changeover because the words never use to scroll over the picture like that.I will have to fix it later but thank you for pointing it out or I wouldn't have realized it.
As for grammar and punctuation,especially the punctuation,this story is a few years old when I was really starting to write and my punctuation wasn't great.I'm actually starting to go over all my old work and fix this so it will be fixed soon. Anyways, thanks for the comment :)

I didn't. I don't have his number and I was busy catching up with the family I know for sure is my family xD I hate being around my whole family though because they make me feel like I walked into a VIP party full of celebrities while I'm the ugly duckling. HOW CAN ONE FAMILY BE SO FUCKING GORGEOUS WHETHER THEY WAY 30 POUNDS OR 800 POUNDS? I'm not even kidding. I'm jealous of my own family.

That really sucks, but you have quite the will power to turn those guys down. WOO-HOO YOU WIN AN AWARD! Yeah, I don't know.

Realists are the best! xD

I haven't really accomplished anything. However, there was this huge family reunion on my dad's side of the family which was two hours away from where I lived and guess what? There was a boy who teases me a lot at school and I was all like "HOW THE HELL ARE YOU IN ANY WAY SHAPE OR FORM PART OF MY FAMILY? WTF????" I mean, what is the likelyhood of having someone from the small town I live in, be invited as well to this familiy reunion. Seriously.

We went swimming, though, so that was an accomplishment...I guess. There were fireworks and they were pretty deamn awesome.

I'm glad you had fun and yes, it is good to be optimistic, but I'm more of a pesimist. How about you?

I hate when people steal stuff! My mom had her phone, GPS, money and her ipad stolen at an airport. But instead of being upset about it, she says "YAY! I get a new phone, gps and a new ipad!" so yeah...

And yeah, fifty bucks is still fifty bucks that could have gotten you something cool. People are so rude.

I love talking to you too :D and my life is the same thing every day: eat, write, excersize. I have no life, actually.

Have fun at the pool today! summer is already haflway over and I haven't even swam. What kind of messed up teen am I? xD

Agreed; except, maybe Spider-Man. Nothing else decent comes out till the 20th. Although, I doubt The Dark Knight Rises would be any good without Heath Ledger as the Joker... and Anne Hathaway shouldn't be in movies like Batman.

How's life?

Yes, that was a dumbass question; I'm sorry.

I LOVE YOU TOO, GIRL!

Oh, boy, and then when you get there, the only decent movie is some Disney animation where the plot is just as cliche as the Disney animation that was released not too long before...

I'm not dissing Disney. I love it! Or rather before the twenty-first century aha. Good luck with that....date. Can I consider it a date? I don't care what you two think, I'ma call it a date :3

Oh, that sucks. But at least you aren't like one of my used-to-be-best-friends who flirted with my ex on my birthday when she was sleeping over while we were watching a movie when he had just broken up with me the day before. That was a long, detailed sentence. HAHA.

Maybe you should tie her up in a chair with a lying detector on her head and interogate her by saying, "I WANT TO RIDE OFF INTO THE SUNSET WITH YOUR EX, BUT ONLY IF YOU ARE OKAY WITH IT. IF YOU DON'T TELL ME THE TRUTH, I WILL CALL UP THOMAS HEWITT TO CHOP UP AND EAT YOUR INSIDES AND SKIN YOUR FACE SO HE CAN WEAR IT."

Hmm...maybe that's too harsh....

What movies do you guys plan to see if you are going?

Hmm...definitely ask her before you try anything then.

So he has a thing for you, eh? Well, that is no surprise at all xD you are gorgeous!

I think it isn't bad to date or flirt with him or whatever the hell you want to do with him xD a year ago is quite a while ago. Good luck!

I wish I was invited to parties, but then again, parties aren't my scene. I am actually more of a party-pooper.

What is this ex of hers like? If you don't mind talking about it haha

What makes you so busy? You are lucky. I have no life whatsoever.

You are too amazing, haha.

I think it depends on the situation:

1) who broke up with who?
2) is your friend dating anyone or announced that she likes someone else?
3) did this ex officially say he is over your friend?

YES! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THEM BOTH! DO MAKE ME WAIT TOO LONG...I THINK I MIGHT DIE DX

I hope you had a great vacation and you really don't have to read my shit, really :)

Yes, Aden inviting them sounds more realistic and would be very interesting. Maybe he invites all of them so they can all have a reunion like high schools do and shit and they party hardy, get drunk, do stupid things, have sex, etc. Yup, I would definitely die of happiness just reading it! LOL.

I'm not exactly sure how he doesn't die if he jumped out the window, but if he doesn't then him and Kinsey could live happily ever after...No, actually Chase would probably be teased and bullied at school for his attempt at suicide. Or everyone would ignore him and he'd be an outcast and Kinsey has to make a choice between him and his reputation. OOO, that'd be rich.

My stories are going great. I'm really wrapped up in Tainted Dolls. I've never loved a story so much! I am writing it like crazy xD Though, I'm withholding most of the chapters cause I'm an evil writer like that.

Good luck with your writings! I know you will think of a brilliant idea soon, that's just the kind of person you are!

thank you so much for the critiquing of my story :D i'll try to fix the mistakes as soon as possible,

You lucky bitch!

I don't think it'd be too weird. It is a fictional story and you can make it however you want. Maybe you can have them appear at different times. Like one person is there and they hang for a few days and they run into someone else? Something like that.

I wish you luck!

And I can't believe you'd be stuck on a story such as Through the Window! HOW IS IT POSSIBLE?

Hmm... Mind telling me those ideas? I might be able to help more if you did, but if you don't want to because it might spoil things, then I completely understand haha.

All I can say at this point is that maybe the next chapter should be a long, deep and thoughtful conversation of Aden and Sim about what he wants. Maybe he mentally puts himself in two positions to test the waters.

The first position being married to Hannah and never being able to be with Cassidy again and he thinks about he would feel if he were to never be able to see her agian...

The second one being if he was with Cass. Would he feel complete or not? Would he mind not being with Hannah ever again? Etc.

Just going off of your latest chapter :)