Oh I see.
Well when I looked at your other story I didn't see that many spelling errors, I mean a few, but it was perfectly understandable.
So don't worry about it.
well I did read the first chapter on my itouch I left a comment too.
my computer is being dumb but I will figure something out and I'm sorry I haven't updated anything I can't cause my dumb computer
but anyways how are you?
ur welcome!
how about her plane ended and then her dad picked her up and drove back to his place and she gets settled iin. Next, she went for a walk by the park and she bumps into Colin i think that's his name(i'm a forgetful person). After that, they talk to each other and found out that he is her nieghbor or watever u like and they go to the same school. Finally u can take it after that. i may not help but it is an idea.
update soon!
=)
So do you have any pets at all, I mean besides the dog that passed away do you have anymore?