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I agree.

I say that all the time. They should be huge...especially considering the state the music business is in at the moment. But oh well. Their vocalist/guitarist was actually in another band called Mars Electric and they were pretty big down here. I've tried researching them, though, and their music is even harder to find than Lynam's. >.<

Thank you for the comment on "Kiss and Control." It made me smile. =)

And you're welcome! You went and listened to Lynam?

Okay, I fixed the text, I just made it plain black. Sorry again! ha Thanks for reading BTW. [=

haha thank you :) I really hope you continue to read/enjoy :)

Ohhai! :D

Thank you. I tried to do the tabs but is just kinda screwed with me! Lol and yeah, I usually do alot more in the way of description but for the first chapter I decided to get some of the basics in, and plan on elaborating a lot more in the next part :) I really do hope you continue to read, and can't tell you enough how much I appreciate feedback!

Huh? Oh, I thought she had one. You're right, Kara and Trek are being ignored. That's a terrible, ungodly sin, it is!


I'll fix that ASAP.

hi kiri

Thank you for your comment on my story. I will take everything you said into consideration. What really helped was the don't tell, show bit. Thank you :)

No problem it was really good :)

okay! well now what you said before makes more sense, thank you for reading over it again, i greatly appreciate it...i will work on it
bye!
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thanks for the comment chica.....I really appreciate your critism and I've tried to change it up a bit and am on my way to edit it again. I wanted to know if it was too big of a favor to ask, for you to check it out again and give me more advice?
Thanks so much again :)
xxxchicaxxx

Thanks for the comment on my one shot. =]

Well thanks! I'd love the input! :-)

Yeah I know, the rhythm is MAJORLY messed up :L


But thanks for commenting ^xD

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Thankyou for the advice on my poem, personaly I dislike it but my friend Darnel wanted me to write one about Beuty she is the one who thinks she is ugly. But yeah free verse is scrary if that makes sense at least to me it. Once again thankyou

hi!!

I'm random!!

Horse Hiccups!

You see it just comes out!

*cough* Check my story and poems!

Yeah i still don't know!