I'm glad you liked it, but it's in some need of editing that I just haven't had the chance to get to yet, so hopefully once that's done things will be cleared up =)
does like, NO ONE read my about section!? That's how I write. I've already explained that I write things out like a script. If you don't like it you don't have to read it. But don't tell me to change it cuz I only write CERTAIN things like an actual story becuase it's really hard to do for me. So I save it for special ones. So don't tell me to change how I wrote it, ur just waisting ur time.
12 is Shake it by metro station isn't it?
and then thank you for the comment on my story.
I appreciated it. And also I noticed your signuature
it's from a book. Impulse by Ellen Hopkins right?