Thanks for the concrit! It's really appreciated. I'm only 12 so I knew it would be sucky. The sex part was mostly written by my friend and I just did the begining and end. I've read a lot of frerard, frikey. and waycest sex scenes (Cuz I'm a perv. lol jk) but I'm really nervous about writing it. I'm not mad at all xD
no, i haven't stopped writing 'oh baby..'!
i'm just slacking on the updating process, i apologize! the next chapter should HOPEFULLY be out soon, so look out for it!