good job. your poems are good. and good luck trying to publish them, i think you may have a good chance.
Can you look at my poem? i actually have 3 poems but only one of them is serious, the other two are short songs that my friend and I wrote at 4 in the morning just to tease our other friends. lol. The serious poem that I want you to read is called "Maybe".......but feel free to read the other two. haha :]
Thank you for the poem comment not many people comment on poems and if they do they only say i like it and stuff like that never any real thought put in to them
Thank you so much for the comment on my poem.
It really meant a lot.
Like, insanely.
Words can't actually express how much I loved your feedback.
Thank you again <3 (:
Hey, thanks for the poem comment. And I know that one line didn't rhyme, I did that purposely. Its my own stlye of writing that kind of poem. By causing it to not rhyme when you read it your brain has to think harder about it. (I really didn't expect to get 2 comments moments after writing this, =D Lol)
aww....Thanks for the comment!I thought it was pretty bad,but oh well.
I guess I should try free writing more often.^_^
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