Yep, yeo.
=)
But at least on here you get your own page and can talk to people easier.
Plus most people on here are super friendly.
Or I think they are I haven't met anyone rude.
Of course not! I'm writing a fan fiction too! And it is most definatly not realistic...I mean hollywood Undead kidnapping people...i don't see it happening. So Unrealistic is good.
I like longer stories theu're great! And I know what you mean about liking reviews. Sometimes it takes awhile for people to start reading though trust me I know. =D so give it time before you think no one will be interested!
I really like your story! Keep it up! I would subscribe to it...but i never check my email so id never get it anyways...so I'm gonna ve chekin in everyday to see if you updated!
Yeah I mean the general idea is to not make it obvious, but keep people guessing.
But make sure it is possible.
I mean I highly doubt Billie would date a 16 year-old and fall in love with her and then have sex with her and marry her and stuff.
I mean he could kinda be like, yeah I like her, but she's too young and it scares me how much I like her, but it just isn't right. We have to be friends and then they can seperate go about there way and like a year later they can bump into each other and yeah okay I don't want to write the story for you, but haha I hope it helps.
But I will tell ya, there are definately people who will like more fantasy.
So mix it up a bit that way you get the best of both worlds, if you continue it further than just a couple of chapters.
I don't think it's stupid.
Maybe on the unrealistic side.
I would make it more of a one-shot maybe two-shot deal where your friends did leave you, but GD didn't take you on tour, but helped you find your way back and they took out to dinner and a movie or something, ya know?
Oh and make your age closer to theirs cause they're like old and you don't want them to be pedophiles....
Once you see them all, you get used to them, you know?
I like the live version of Dominated Love Slave the best out of Tre's performances.