Aims, you need help...mental help. You capitalize proper names and it should be "so ARE" not "so is" because you're talking about three other people. You misspelled Simple Plan and mention you are missing comas and an apostrophe. At least you didn't misspell anyone's name and PLEASE don't ever type MCR it's My Chem. or My Chemical Romance. Please, for Mikey's sake, fix this thing so it makes sense to the rest of the world. :)
Much love from the morgue, Myra