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Hey! I went on a "date" with a boy from MA when I was New York at a Horse Ranch. (I know you don't know him and I forget his last name anyway)

And yeah, while it's cold here (I don't really live that close to Toronto. I'm kinda in a little town that's got a Variaty/General Store we have to drive ten minutes to get to a real grocery store) we don't really have that much snow this year. It's been really mild. Curse Global warming right?

Have you heard that they're flying snow into Vancouver for the games? Kinda embarrassing seeing as we're the "great white north"

lol
Jinx is a long document
And of course you're not boring me.
I was wondering however, what time is it where you are?
I know you're in the States, but I don't know where. As I said I'm nosey.
I'm in Ontario and it's 11:01.

Yes
This is what happened with Jinx.
I stopped writing in the middle of something important and now I'm completely stuck on it. I haven't written it forever. It's just gone poof... leaving me with a very long document

Adel is a boy, but no he did not push Winter.
You're never going to guess the secret, but it will get revealed to the reader fairly early in the story. Because it's important to the character... the secret is really what defines the character

Hey, I've been behind in school before, it's not easy.
Like really behind... and yet I've never failed a course...
Um... Jinx is really long and needs a lot of editing...
And I haven't really written anything for Nerdtastic my friend just has me listed as an author on it.
But yes. I am writing Winter's Tale, but I will read Lively Street later. When my idea goes away

Yes, but that's what's so much fun about fantasy.
Okay. so I just posted a new story... could you read it when you have a chance
(do your project falling behind in school is bad)
It's really different from anything I've written
(boys are hard to write)

I agree. No one wants a spoiled brat as their Queen.
Or if they do have a spoiled brat as their Queen it's usually an 'evil' country
Or it's a sappy bodice ripper romance where she sees the error of her ways with some stable boy or blacksmith

Well it's true. While people may not be beautiful physically they may be beautiful inside. And I know how cliche that sounds, but it's true. I myself am nothing special to look at, but I'm a nice person and that's what makes me beautiful

I thought that she'd be pretty.
Not beautiful, but, you know, pretty.
Like a lot of girls. Someone that's nice to look at but not someone who'll stick in your memory
But okay then... so he's not evil. The King and Queen sure made him seem evil

Ohh!!!
Does Trinity actually fall in love with a nice person?
Or is she doomed to be with the evil guy forever?

I am nosey
forgive me

Maybe. I might have my mythologys mixed up.
Anywho... can I have a hint as to the future of your story?

Zephyr is the God of the Wind. I think it's Roman.
My sister rides a horse called Zepher.
I named a boy in my story Zepher after the horse because its what she wanted

lol
yeah.
I usually give my characters weird names that are commonplace English words.
Jinx, Echo, Sabre (not as common), Grave, Sherlock (I just wanted to get across that he was really smart), and Zepher (not as commonplace I know but my sister wanted him to be named after a horse)

Ooh, that's cool.
My characters just have weird names.
At least yours are cool and mean something

I was raised to be respectful to... to my elders and to people in general...
Sorry
thought that I forgot to add to the last comment

It's progressing like a regular conversation.
If you would like we can go back to your story.
How do you pronounce the Princesses name?
I was having fun with it while reading.
(I'm really bad at names)

The apparent comment on my age is no problem. I am older than you, but it's no biggie. It's just a two years and if you were born early it's probably closer to one.
I didn't find them awful, but they weren't spectacular. Not worth the ear splitting screams they were reciving. It's something that in ten years they'll be on the radio as just another old boy band in my opinion. I don't even think they're that good looking.

No, sorry, I just read the first, but I'll continue reading on another day.
And your welcome for the comment on your other story, I really like it, it's really interesting.

She hasn't been able to get to a computer to log on.
It's HER computer yet her sister seems to think she can hide away with it.
Anyway, I'm only 17. I'm not really your senior, I'm your peer. There's no reason to be embarrassed, what I'm saying is true.
And I'm not really into the Jonas Brothers. I went to their last concert in Toronto but that was because I was with my sister and her friends as a chaperone. That is about my full extent of exposure to them. They sang Sweet Caroline which made me laugh.