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hey remember me? i send you a message along time ago about a journal i wrote. well i have a new one i think you should read.( this lifes appendix)
and let me know your opinion. please =)

no, that is fine, if people keep saying they are good, I'll never learn... So thank you for the advice.

No,the comment was fine.I've wanted a comment like that one for AGES.
Oh...Thanks for the comment.

I would if i could with the colors haha but I know nothing about this site and how to make it colorful or interesting :) haha sorry

Yeah.. I know.. I'm gonna fix it tomorrow! I jsut really need some sleep! So, don't worry.. I don't hate you.. I just put it on there so i could fix it tomorrow.. So your off the hook.. For now...

Dah dah dah dah.. just kidding.. I just feel the same way.

Thats an excellent point :) and i wouldnt feel very proud of written work that wasnt written by the auther so i do understand what you mean.

Again I love that your takeing the time to help out my work, dont be afraid to suggest anything that'll help

anything to help my work, thank you so much for your suggestion and i will try something different, I also didn't like that last line, lol :)

Thanks for reading my poem "Alcohol". :)

aaahhh i see haha im alwasy forgetting things

you're welcome
I really liked it

your very welcome hun
im mariah
idk if i already told you lol
so how are you
how do you like mibba? :))

Thanks for the comment and advice, i like to get some constructive criticism every once in a while, instead of every one just saying it good and they like it.
I’ll try and fix it maybe, but I’m not sure how good it will be after. Cause when I write I don’t try to do like ABAB and rhyme, but sometimes it just happens.
And could you may be read some of my other poems and tell me what you think =)

thx...actually i'm taking guitar lessons...so I'm sure I can create a melody very soon..XD

thanks for the advice. =)
yeah my writings been a little off lately.
tips are always welcome.

...srsly? That's pretty damn expensive. I hate having a driver and a maid. I mean, it's convenient, but I'm just not very comfortable with the maid. Or the driver. Our driver's kind of a jerk, actually -_- . And I wouldn't for the life of me let someone else touch my laundry when I could do it myself. I'm very particular about stuff.

So are you from the US or the UK?

I'm not really into clubbing. Or hookah. Or any of that stuff really. i tasted beer once and hated it. I tasted vodka and hated it more. >.< But the pub culture and stuff is definitely interesting. Some of the music is actually pretty damn awesome.

duuuude. The beggars freak me the fuck out. >.< Especially the armless ones. And there's this old lady near this checkpost who like, presses up against the car and makes faces. *shudders* My brother makes fun of me because it gets me so creeped out.

hey could you concrit on my other poems and journal? it would be much appreciatedXD

well i have this i have a new journal and it will mean the world to me if you commented you think u can take a look at it and tell me your opion please again it would mean alot =)

Oooohh... Well then, how are you?