cobra9874 / Comments

Sorry about the wait. I could have sworn I replied. I got about 40 readers and 5 subscribers. I'm probably just going to take it down before I leave. There really isn't any point in keeping up something nobody reads.

the journal

Thank you for the comment on the story. I will do what I can with what you sent me.

Ooh, I did not think about that! WHOO! Now I have an excuse to throw them a party! :D

Because the first story started in 2009 and went through to 2011, because it took DTO two years to get on the map. Now it's the year after. :)

But anyways, how's life?

I've been writing it. I'm almost done with it, though not completely. I'm going to edit it, though, too.

Heyy! It's Marley from 'Jasey Rae'
And I'd like to thank you sosososoossooso much for commenting on the story! You have no idea how much they make my day. (: No joke, they make me grin. :D ahhaa,

Thanks again, and sorry this is so late XD
Marley<3(:

Yeah,
Some of the other boys are doing better though,
sort of haha.
You'll find out.

He's still a low life, after five years.

You should have known him in real life then haha.
The story is fictional, but the boys are based off of real people.

My other readers understand my story, yet if you need more help just let me know and I can explain parts of the story that you don't understand.
Yet keep in mind that the main thing is the story is that the main character has a personal problem that she doesn't yet understand.
So I'm very limited about telling you parts of the story.
Ya know, cause the climax of the story will be her figuring out her problem, and then things will fall to place.
I added in that one part of the story to the end of the summary to clue readers on what's going on.

Yeah(:
But it's slowly getting better.

Understandable. I hadn't meant to put it off so long, but I had a lot of family drama and shit, so I haven't had the time to do much.

I'm going to correct that stuff later[x

err sorry if you felt offended .....I was actually trying to model some of my characters after some real people..

Thanks for my first comment on that story. I truly appreciate it. I think stuff like that with Sharon is really interesting. Something similiar to that happened to me once. I kid you not.

Yep! I started it today, I'm happy about it so far.

Thanks for commenting on [i]You're Coming On[/i]! I'm glad you're excited for it! :)

Well, you gotta REALLY think about what's going on.
It all pieces together, from the info of the summery to the small except of the story that goes under it.
Alicia had a problem though she doesn't know what it is, and Jimmy is there to help her out and to make her realize what her problem is.
Though of course to get to all of this you have to understand and catch all the double meanings, metaphors, and "between-the-lines" that are in the story.