Sorry. I just realized what you wanted me to look at. I'm going to look at it know and I'll leave a comment to tell you what I think. I didn't realize that this had a link in it.
This is the first time I've been on mibba since... well.. school started, so well over eight months ago, and I frankly want to thank you for your comment on "Claws and Bite Marks" my extremely dumb story. xD I am being serious too. The minute I got to chapter 14 I wanted to kill it and rewrite the entire stupidity that was that story, but I forced myself to finish what I did have planned.
Which was extremely shitty of me. And I'm glad you didn't giggle and tell me the story was lovely; cause it wasn't and I was actually laughing really hard and smiling when I read your comment. Like yesterday. xD
Well I wrote Attractive But Bitter nearly 4 years ago so I would imagine it's absolute shit. haha but I have the sequel finished I just never posted it on this site! I'm sorry! Thanks for commenting though!
I want to tank you for your comment on Pavane. Most people on this site don't bother to comment on stories anymore and it's a shame. I didn't really edit the story when I wrote it because it was a quick story I kinda through together after have a dream about it (Yes, I fell asleep while watching Vampire Diaries when the dream happened) and was trying to rush. Thanks again for your comment though :)
Thanks. I know how many errors No Matter What They Told You, Your Not Alone, has it's the first chapter story that I ever did & didn't have an editor back then, but I'm very glad that you liked it & even picked out a few...well quite a few quotes. (: It means a lot. Hopefully if I have time tonight I'll update my latest Alec Volturi story then have my newest one out of notebook phase in a month. Anyways enough about my writing plans I just wanted to thank you for reading, recommending and commenting.
Oh, thanks! The lists I had trouble with were in the first chapter--the list of Delia's different hairstyles and the list of things Jake knew about her. I don't remember any in the second chapter. I think part of it might have to do with the bright green font which I find hard to read. Oh, new Mibba... I gotcha. Just one more thing to check on, I guess!
@ forever.yours Perfect timing. Ish. I finished the story!!! Took the better part of two hours too! Or more. Haha. I was torn between peeing and sitting in my car reading and the former overtook the latter...not to worry, my bladder and I are both very happy now. I've got more errors and comments for you, and quotes that I'm definitely going to save as inspiration and maybe borrow. =]
I started my major editing process forever ago because I thought the story was sort of shit, but I just don't have the time. Thanks for the edits! I indeed meant irk. haha. I hope you enjoy the story. I'll go back and fix those errors!
@ Renavelia As I wrote the comments while reading the story. Ah, Chase Crawford. That's interesting. Puts a whole new perspective on things. You HAVE to finish the trilogy! It wouldn't be a trilogy if not! And you already wrote two entire STORIES on it, so you may as well just finish it! All of us subscribers are waiting to see what happens. I mean, come on.
Comment for Rain on Me: Thank you for commenting. I know that there is a LOT of errors in this story. This was my first story ever finished and I wrote this in my Twilight phase. I have been meaning to go back and edit each chapter, but I am so busy with college work at the moment.
Comment for WNAHWYHAWTC: Again, I will be editing every chapter when I get the time. Lol. Thank you for actually leaving a comment telling me what you like and don’t like. I appreciate that.
Comment for Lost Without You: Actually I never killed Larik off in the second story. I pointed out that that was a vampire with the power to change his appearance. That wasn’t even Larik would was in the second story. As why he is now appearing in the trilogy. (I wrote this while reading your comment.) I came up with his name one day on the spot and thought it sounded fitting. He is portrayed by Chase Crawford. I am not even sure if I’ll ever be able to finish the trilogy on account of writer’s block and a super busy schedule. Sorry :(
@celestial_royalty, I appreciate your honesty, and even thought I can seen how the title, may come of as making the story a comedy, this was never what I planned for the story, there's little a bit of humor thrown in here and there, but it's more of my personal humor, I understand most may not find the same things humorous but once again I appreciate your honesty and feedback, but anything you would like to see more in the story I would gladly listen to, and consider it. Thank you, and I hope you continue reading it, and leaving your feedback.
@ angel4ever35 Maybe so. I'm not subscribed to the story- I was drawn in by the hilarious title, but as the story's humor hasn't matched it, and it hasn't had any relation to the story, I didn't hit that little square button. If and when it does, feel free to message me again. If you take the time to share your story, I'll do the same to share my thoughts [: