Hello, I was wondering if you have the time, could you perhaps read one or all, depending on whether you like them, of my stories and help with improvong my writing. Your about me says you like to edit. So perhaps you could help me. I have 3 stories, I'd prefer if you checkout out Little bit of truth of Crash into me. Please and thank you. If you can't do so, I understand.
Marie
Sorry I replied so late, I hardly ever go on mibba now.
Basically, for Discovering You, I don't think the writing is that great, and I didn't think anyone was reading it, so I stopped doing it. It depends if people are interested in it - if so, I will write it, as I still remember the plot and everything, which i actually quite like. This isn't just a hint, trying to get people to read it, its just honestly what I thought.
So as for updates...I'm not sure. It's a maybe, which is probably the worst answer ever, so sorry! But that you for asking, and I'm not ruling out updating it.
haha, sorry... and I do swear to have the next chapter out soon, as well. Not at all a filler, either... If nothing in my life screws up in the next week, then you should have a good, nice chapter *nod*
Oh my gosh, I know, I'm so sorry. I'm just, seriously sucking right now. I'm just...I want to get to the good stuff so bad, that I just... I don't know O.O...haha, I'm so sorry, and I SWEAR, the next one isn't going to be a filler. I'm gonna TRY make it as awesome as I can manage for you, I promise promise promise.
haha, I'm sorry for the confusion about Embry and Seth. When writing the Embry chapter, I was a little... off, but I had to establish about Seth the importance of him, and you'll understand why in later chapters! just know that there is an importance of me making that chapter with Seth...
Thanks for the story comment. And thank you for telling me about the error in the story. I fixed those things right away! I need an editor. lol.
Okay. I was wondering if I could send you my one-shot whenever it's finished?
Just so you can look at it and see if it needs any editing or fixing lol.
I'd really appreciate it! :)
Hey, I just want to thank you for your honest feedback on my story, [i]Complete Unknown.[/i] I get what you mean in regards to it being a little dull, as I'm used to writing stories with more action too. That's what I mean by it being 'completely pointless', I just like being a little dramatic about it :3 I wanted to try out something different this time around with writing.
Regardless, I hope you enjoy reading! Thanks again!
thanks for the comment!!
i wrote that when i was like 16 or something so my english than was worse than now haha
now you make me wanna reread my story haha though it's because its old im not gonna bother to rewrite it :p
but thanks!!
u commented on my story that's like three years old or something hahaha honestly i dont remember what i wrote so i dont recall whether dumbledore is alive or not :p
Hey, I'm currently starting to update "And When I Caught Myself", but I'm revising the story from here on out, deleted all former chapters and redoing them, I was unhappy with how the story was beginning to turn out, and idk I just thought it was time for a change, the first two chapters are up for the new and improved version, so take a peak!