You're right, I guess. It just sort of depends on what situation the story is.
I'm guessing you like anime or manga or whatever it's called? I'd get it right, but my friend talks about both all the time and I don't know which is which really. Do you draw them?
Hahahah, the teachers actually say that ? That reminds me of the time that Ms. Lockhart was gonna send me to time out at Bayard for slouching in class . . .
But that's still kewll . :]
I just find that somehow it can bring across a familiarity of emotions or place, so that they can imagine the place or people better because they've done it before. You know what I mean?
Like if you read a book over a few times it sort of creates a film in your head of scenes that get more and more detailed, and if I want something similar to something I've read a thousand times, then I'll use it.
It's only happens occasionally, but I find it fun when I put the book name at the bottom and people message me saying, 'That was such a great book, I really enjoyed it.'
Thank you soooooo much, I'm going to run through and correct it. Maybe even re-write it.
I will say now that I will probably steal bits from famous books, like Twilight or Harry Potter, just to get the reader more interested. Have you ever done that? I make sure I put notes at the bottom saying that I got it from certain books and that it wasn't my work, and I'm pretty sure that's OK.
Yeah, I know . :]
Urghh, I have gym [i]all year[/i] though . D:
*sobs*
Oh wellzz . :]
Sadly, I find myself almost excited for school to start . *shakes head* I'm so ashamed of myself .
Me and my mom walked around about 4 times . Seriously, that place has really weirdly shaped hallways . But, I keep looking at the map, and I think that I should know how to get everywhere, so long as I take the right stairs . >.<'
Thanks! Wow, just posted the first chapter and I have three readers and a comment already! Kinda weird if you ask me...
I'm Samantha by the way. I'm new (obviously) but I'll try and be a frequent updater.
It's nearly 11 over here in England but I might stay up tonight and write another chapter, just so new readers can go right ahead and get to the main story bit.
You got any sort of advice for me? I like being told how to improve my stories, it makes me happier than someone possibly lying to make me feel better.
It's okay, I understand . :] I've kinda just been in the mood for being lazy around the house anyway .
Ehh, I [i]kind of[/i] figured it out . It's still really confusing though . :l
Hii ! Haven't talked to youu in a while .
Gah, I just got home from the CHS orientation; yeah, that school is [i]hella[/i] confusing . You should see the map . >.<'
ooo, Maybe I can become a plant and use photosynthesis ! Or wait . . . that's for food . Damn . Well maybe I can just . . . But then that would work for when I get hungry ! Maybe I can be one of those really tiny trees ! Like the one from the karate kid ! Bonsai trees ! That's what they are . Or maybe I can be a pretty flower . :] Err, no, I don't think that suits me very well . I think I'll stick with the Bonsai tree . Maybe I can suck all of the water from the air . Err, at least some of it . I'm sure that you can't suck [i]all[/i] of the water from the air . But, yeah, that will hold me over for a while .
I'm guessing you like anime or manga or whatever it's called? I'd get it right, but my friend talks about both all the time and I don't know which is which really. Do you draw them?
Samantha xox