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new poem

hello :]

Hey michael! I'm so sorry it's been so long!
:) Let me know what has happened so far about the Fresh Pen!

I'm bored.

Thanks :D
Oh man, I'm beat!

I have recently checked out your website, www.thefreshpen.com. And I do have a couple suggestions. If you're interested, PM me. It is harmless critique.

Yeah i guess your right(:

I only asked because some people are afraid of fan fiction for whatever reason. They think we choose someone we know and admire and try to think as they do, but that's a very wrong idea. I'll send you an e-mail as soon as I decide which one is my 'finest piece of writing'. I didn't want to send one of my crazily long stories; I'm afraid it might scare some people away, ha.
Expect something from me soon; I'll tell you on the e-mail who I am (:

I just sent it! (:

I don't think it's my best, seeing as how my rhyming scheme was a little off kilter, but it was fun to write anyway. (:

I got my school schedule today!

Haha, okay. (: Expect it soon!

Hurray for the updates!
(:

I'm contemplating on whether or not to send another piece in...Not too sure on it yet.

Hello ^^
I could be interested in joining your website, because I'm all for writing, reading, commenting and sharing as much of an amazing experience as a writer as possible. So, I just have to send you the application to your e-mail?

And tell me something; I mostly write fanfiction, so will it be allowed? Or do I need to turn it into official Original Fiction? Because my characters are all original in a way; they're only inspired in someone else's looks...
Thanks for letting me know about that website :)

ehhhh i dont think i'm quite good enough for that site(:

For talking to someone I wasn't suppose to be. Long story.

Hey i love the website(:

Every-hour communication?

Haha, well how was vacation?
Tell me all about it :D

Grounded. I have been grounded for the past two weeks.

Yeah. Sorry for the late reply.
Whats up?

I would absolutely love it if you critiqued my stories and tell others about it. Thank you. I'll definitely check out the website.

Please read my stories The Four Stars and Troubled Soul.