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Maybe!
It was my friends guitar and he abuses the poor thing.
Haha, I like the way you described the two!
Controlled chaos...well said. xD

Either is a good choice, I myself play acoustic because I like the feeling of sitting in grass and playing something. It's a little nostalgic for me, haha
Plus, I tried electric and only could make it screech :/

Acoustic or electric?

I kind of stopped playing sports when my heart began to act up, haha
Now I stick to painting and writing compositions for piano.
Do you play an instrument at all?

welcome

Yea...I'm not very good with sports. The only sport I know about is Tennis and that's because I used to play. xD

Lakers?That sounds familiar, does that have anything to do with sports? Aw! That's so sweet that your girlfriend sent you one of those!:D
Haha, glad I'm not so weird now that I know weather effects others moods as well. Well, what's new is the fact I may fail my writing class...but I'm a writer. Makes no sense. xD

The weather made my day go way down into the pits of hell, haha. (Dramatic way of putting it huh?) I'm so used to the cold that I'm going through shock at the change in temperature.

How was yours?

Motivation is always so tricky, good luck with it

I'm sure you can pull it off, have fun trying that style out

I'm pretty sure that style is when it's a-b-a-b and then you take the first...or second and put in with the a-c-a-c...Which ever is the sonnet style you loop the first rhyme in the second stanza is the one I dread and avoid xD

Haha, hope I'm not insulting but that's just so cute! Yea, I'm better at Shakespearean form than the pertrachian(?) I have no idea how to spell it.

I like the classic a-b-a-b-c-c format, otherwise known as a sonnet. haha. If I'm not writing a sonnet then I'm just pulling "poetry" from a hat. That's really nice though, not to be mean, but I didn't think guys actually wrote poems about their girlfriends...I thought that was movie-only stuff.

Really? Do your friends not like poetry?
See, I don't know why but I would find the a-a-b-b-c format a little tricky.
Then again, different strokes for different folks. haha

I think a lot of poets have that kind of humility when it comes to their work, that's why I find poetry that much better. Haha, really it's no trouble. You can stop telling me you appreciate my doing this anytime now.(:

Then I may just have to check out those rhyming poems, so my bias towards them will be a-oh-kay. :D It's always nice to find a good poet on sites like these

I love reading free verses. (Since I have this mindset of rhyming is needed, bleh.) I think yours was one of the better ones I've read so I had to comment it.(:

Your welcome anyways, it was nothing, haha

No problem!! =D

You have some really good poems! They are so deep and touching, I love them :)

Any time n_n