great job. I love your characterssss :) hahah I cant wait to see what happens next would you mind reading my story or i mean what ive updated on just smile please
Uh ohhh im wanting to know who tyler is. :) greattt storyyy. Maybe make alex and her relatonship take slower steps. Like have more convo betwwen them i mean they've talked what twice. I understand you want to get the story moving but your such a great writer you can take it slow while also hooking the reader. So again justtt a tip. Dont have to take it. :)
Brooke
I read one chapter and it was realllyy greatt. I mean beyond wonderful. Though it would really help if i didnt have to strain my eyes to read. Some words I couldnt see and just moved on. I would suggest using a light neutral color as the background and have black handwriting or the opposite way around. Maybe have the pictures outside of the text and not as the background for the text. Just a suggestion.
well ill deffff read your stroy :) and give you really honest feedback. I would totally adore you if you would return the favor. HAHAHAH :)
thankss brooke
I love August Is Over by them. ;]