(continuing) anyways, I will edit the format you write in, to make it more reader friendly and pleasing to the eye, presentation can make or brake you! I hope to become a very useful staff member for you, also I will be editing the Summary for the story, only because it does not do the story, justice, and makes it seem less appealing than what the story truly is!
add me to 1 million secrets as well :) I am mainly intrested in editing stories right now, although I will write, I will mostly help you get it set up to attract as many readers as possible, you can check out some of my work on my page, and a little of what I did to inside,