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Holy cowwww!
I am never on here any more.
FAIL.

Jeez Louise!
Thank you so much for such a detailed story comment. I love getting feedback in general, but when readers make comments on specific aspects of my writing, I'm especially happy. It shows how much you appreciate the little things I put into the story.

People like you are the reason I keep posting :)

Hello there!

I'm the host of the superheroes/villains contest and the list of bands I had was on my old laptop so I don't have it anymore.

So, I'm going to delete the post on the message board and redo it.

You can reenter or drop out.

Here's the link to it if you want to stay in:

http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/post/8414922/#8414922

The deadline is Halloween.

Hello! I may seem like some creepy stalker, but trust me; I am far from that. I would really appreciate if you would read my Alex Gaskarth fanfiction! It's my first story, so if you like. Please comment and subscribe!

http://stories.mibba.com/read/291559/What-Makes-It-Wrong-For-Us-To-Fall-In-Love/

<3

Ah, thanks for the great feedback! I'm not going to name names, but I've been noticing that a lot of people have reverted back to the 'I loved it! UPDATE!!!' comments that are really nice, but don't help much when I'm trying to figure out how to improve my writing.

"Walls" is one of my absolute favorites by ATL, and it describes Alex's feelings for Chloe perfectly. Thus, it was an absolute must in this story.

GK Tour was amazing for me, too. I went both nights when they came to Chicago :)

Alex and Chloe have gone through a lot, so it only made sense to me that they'd still have a few rough patches even though all has been forgiven. I know that a lot of people were pushing for them to get back together really quickly, but I couldn't write it that way. Although this is fiction, I need that sense of reality in there to keep things from getting too ridiculous.

Oh, the super jumbo tampons. I actually wrote that part in because I thought it was cute as well as sad. He was so wrapped up in "Therapy" and the fact that he could be losing Chloe to Logan that he temporarily lost his sense of humor. That's exactly why I had Chloe hug him afterward.

Again, I'd like to thank you from the bottom of my Mibbian heart for such lovely feedback. It means the world to me.

Heyy, thanks for the story comment =) x

First of all, I'd like to thank you for the continually amazing feedback. The fact that you're noticing so much while reading makes me smile like this XD

Jack's character seems to write itself whenever I put him in a chapter. I honestly come up with most of his dialogue on the spot and it all works out. Same goes for Zooey. After I finished writing Jamais Vu, I don't think I let go of my habit of ridiculous dialogue between Jack and a girl.

I know that a lot of you are rooting for Alex, but it's nice to see that you understand that she can't let got of Logan just yet. He helped her through a really tough time and put her feelings first when she left for California when he could have easily asked her to make some sort of commitment.

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Jack's Mannequin quote! Yet another reason I like you :D

The upcoming chapters will reveal a few more reasons supporting Chloe's belief that she's supposed to be in California. You'll see what I'm talking about soon enough ;)

The accidental gropage was one of my favorite parts of the latest chapter, so I'm happy that you enjoyed it :)

Hahaha. A lot of people liked Rian and Terra's little chase scene on the beach. I'll keep that in mind when I'm writing.

Thank you so much for the comment!

Thank you for the wonderful comment!
I'm glad that you've caught up with the story and even more happy to hear that you liked it so much :)

Detailed feedback like yours is HIGHLY appreciated because it really give's me a feel for what you like about my writing, so thank you for posting it.

I'll most likely be updating on Monday, and I'm quite sure you'll like where this is all going.

Helloo, thanks for the story comment =) x

Hiya, thanks for the story comment =) Haha, you might actually have to wait a week for a next part because I forgot to mention in my author's note that I'm updating my other story next =S Sorry. But, I'm really glad you're excited about it =) x

Heyyy, cheers for the comment or three =P I'm glad you liked it xx

Hellooo, thanks for the story comment =) hope you're doing well x

I know I've made things muy complicado, but I'm a sucker for drama. Cute and cuddly chapters are fun to write, but things and only stay puppies and rainbows for so long.

Thank you for all the support!

Thank you for yet another wonderful story comment.
I'm glad you're happy about Logan and Chloe's relationship, but at the same time excited for the Alex shake up in the next chapter.

Heyy, thanks for the story comment =) I'll update soon x

Heyy, thanks for the story comment =) Yeahhh, I thought it might be a little more realistic if he remembered that he actually needed the toilet =P

Haha, I guess I do have kind of an advantage with writing it and all ; ) .

I'm glad the message got through about Cassie not being the same anymore.
Thanks again =) x

XD
You're too kind.

Heyy Sam, thanks so much for the story comment =) Aww, haha, I never intended that to be a main line in the story but I'm glad you liked it anyhow.

Haha, the third most amazing relationship in the world? That's front runner for the next chapter title =P if only it was that simple. 10 chapters left can't really have everything running smoothly ; ).

Thanks again =) x

Thank you for the thorough story comment!

I'm glad that you enjoyed Chloe's insight. Parts where I delve into what she's thinking are the ones that I have fun writing.

And I know that Logan's backstory wasn't a happy one, but I was more than satisfied with the way it turned out. I felt that if he was simply a sweet guy with no emotional baggage, I'd be writing Paul all over again. And that wouldn't have been fun for me to write or you to read.

I'm especially happy to hear that you liked the following quote:
'Whatever doesn’t kill you makes you stronger,’ but as you can see, that’s not always the case.

That was actually a last minute add in during the final editing process, and I was stoked that you noticed it.

Again, thank you SO MUCH for commenting.
I really do appreciate the support.
:)