Thanks so much for your comment on Angels born of! Well... Adam isnt really a vampire lol, though it seems lots of people think so based off that once scene. It seems to be something i need to make clearer xD Either way thanks for the critique and advice :D
Thanks for the comment. Admittedly you're not the first to assume it was about Doctor Who (based on the banner I suppose?) But generally fan fics aren't my thing. Matt Smith was the first face that came to mind when I started writing the story, plus I could manipulate that picture enough to work in the color teal, so it just worked out for what I wanted.
Satirical, that's definitely a first. Not a bad thing either. You may be right about the unintentional thing; admittedly there are one or two places where it was intended, but I'm curious about that statement? Care to elqborate a little?
You're the first I think to express dislike of Teal, that's also fairly interesting--also not a bad thong though.
Thank you very much for your comment. I realized everything you an the other users have said and suggested and it made me realize some things that I never thought to check. Thanks for saying it is "Edging towards autobiographical" because now I realize I was doing that sort of, I need to make this type of story way more mysterious, better flashbacks and descriptions and such. Thanks!
Thanks, I'm glad at least one person likes it! It is a pity that period pieces aren't more popular on here because I'm a huge fan of them too Oh well, thank you again for your lovely comments on both my stories and thank you for the sub!
Thanks! As for the layout, I'm not really focusing on that right now. Just the story. But now that I think about it, no one's given feedback on that part except you, so I appreciate that.
Thanks for the comment! I'm glad you like it. And you are the first person to like Danny! Personally I don't like him, but I know his secrets. Haha. Again, thanks for the comment, it means a lot.
Thanks for the comment on my story, I'm sorry for the dialogue, I don't usually write until like 12Am -5AM, so I'm pretty tired. But I before I post I go through all of the lines on Microsoft Word just to make sure all of the grammar and spelling is correct. (the free version of Microsoft word came with my PC). But, thanks for the comment I really like the fact that people enjoy my story. (Comment swap brought you there thought, right?)