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  • Niall James Horan

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    yes i have :3
    I like writing stories with
    a lot of bloodshed and death
    :D
    I am just a twisted person xP
    June 28th, 2011 at 12:50am
  • Lady of the Moon

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    Thanks for the comment once more. :)

    Actually, she's not going to die at the end of this story, but something is going to be happening to her to cause her to leave her family. But she's not going to die.

    And she has major depression, causing her to see her dead lovers. They are a figment of her imagination, but because she's so far in, she doesn't realize it.

    Thanks again! :)
    June 26th, 2011 at 05:36pm
  • Lady of the Moon

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    Thanks for the comment once more. :)

    It will all be revealed why her relationship with her children doesn't get better. It's sad though, the ending that I have written.

    Although in the sequel, Lily is going to try to discover who her mother was. I actually decided on adding that in, even though I wanted it to be sort of a stand alone. But she doesn't know who Rose was, so therefore, she's going to want to know.

    Thanks again! :)
    June 25th, 2011 at 02:56pm
  • Lady of the Moon

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    Thanks for the comment once more. :)

    It makes me a little happier that you weren't bothered with the lusty scene between Rose and Jean, like some other readers. Only one other reader has confessed that to me, that she doesn't mind Jean all that much, and she's one of my good friends.

    And I know, because it is sad with what I'm making them go through, but the relationship with Rose and Luke slowly gets better as the story comes to its end, sadly though, not so much with her children.

    I love it how I make them sound like real people. Haha, thanks again for the comment. :)
    June 24th, 2011 at 01:33am
  • Lady of the Moon

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    Thanks for the comment once more. :)

    I must say that it made me laugh, and as for Rose's behavior, she's just majorly depressed and communicating with her dead lover. But I do know what you're saying, although the more I write into her depression and insanity, the more sorry I become for her family and friends.

    Anyway, thanks again! :)
    June 21st, 2011 at 02:39pm
  • NERD_ALERT.

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    Yay!!!!! a new commenter!!!! And I know what you mean!!! Stupid Noah needs to get his arse up and plant one on Giovanni!!! Thank you for the comment
    June 20th, 2011 at 06:30am
  • Lady of the Moon

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    Thanks for the story comment. :)

    It's natural to feel sorry for Luke, I'm sort of going through that, and I'm the writer. But, hopefully as the story progresses to the end, everything will be cleared up. :)

    I'm hoping, and again I'm the writer.

    Thanks again! :)
    June 16th, 2011 at 10:24pm
  • FrerardJunkie

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    Thanks for the story comment! <333
    Glad you liked the chapter and Frank's dorkiness :)
    We'll try and get another chapter up soon!
    June 7th, 2011 at 07:57pm
  • lame sauce

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    You're comment on Lipstick Lies made me giggle xD <3
    June 6th, 2011 at 05:47am
  • XrayPineapple

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    Hey,
    Thanks so much for commenting on Gerard's Game. I wanted people's reactions to Frank to change, everyone has been feeling so sorry for him recently that I think it's only true I reveal his true identity. It will all be revealed, mwhahahaha.
    June 1st, 2011 at 12:19am
  • bones n' feathers.

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    lol s'all good XD
    May 24th, 2011 at 12:51pm
  • bones n' feathers.

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    yeah i know
    but as the story progresses
    there will only be 3-4 like "Friends"
    so far its headed for Quinn, Hayden, Jinxx and probably Eco. but yeah :/ like the characters will narrow down as time goes by, and they'll just be a blob of boys in the house XD ha
    i knwo its confusing tho, that's why i have the character page set up (:
    May 24th, 2011 at 04:06am
  • ian watkins;

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    -ismakinganewaccount-

    I'll keep talking to you from thereish.
    I might not comment as often. -.-
    I'mma explain everything to everyone later.

    It's Kristen.
    nicholas joseph;. xD
    <3
    January 25th, 2011 at 09:45pm
  • nicholas joseph;

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    Awh, haha.
    Dog walking?

    I know it does. D:
    I'm like, failing everything. -.-
    January 17th, 2011 at 10:20pm
  • nicholas joseph;

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    Ooooooo. :D
    I wish I had a dog. :(
    Haha.

    Ugh. Unwinding from a really horrible first day back to school. xD
    January 10th, 2011 at 10:52pm
  • Just.That.Girl

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    Hey I'm just stopping by to say hello and to let you know that I just started a new story called Buttoned-Up, in case you want to go and check it out :]
    January 10th, 2011 at 08:32am
  • nicholas joseph;

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    Well nice to meet you Avery :D
    What's up?
    January 7th, 2011 at 08:15pm
  • nicholas joseph;

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    Thanks for the friend request! :D
    I'm Kristen<3
    January 3rd, 2011 at 05:17pm
  • Her Afterlife

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    No sad endings. Just more ups and downs lol
    November 23rd, 2010 at 03:42am
  • Her Afterlife

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    Hahaha As much as I like that thought for an ending, this story still has a lot more to go. It'll...when it DOES end (I still haven't ended it...and that chapter was written in March), it WILL be a happy ending. I will promise you that. :)
    November 22nd, 2010 at 04:04am