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Thanks for the comment once more. :)

Thanks for the comment once more. :)

Don't worry, Alex's fate will be revealed towards the end of the story. And Ella will find out.

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Thanks for the comment once more. :)

I actually haven't fully decided. I might, now that you've mentioned it, along with another reader, but as of right now, I'm not sure. Maybe.

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That actually didn't cross my mind while I was writing the last update. I think it's mainly because she's surprised by the information she read, instead of being homophobic but I've also haven't played with it yet either. I haven't written the part yet when they confront him about his affair with Ash.

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Don't worry, I will be adding Lily's input on the diary and whatnot when her and Ella, and later Luke, talk about it. As for Alex, you'll just have to wait and see.

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woot!
awesome, thanks for lettig e know, it dawned on me the other day and i was like T_T shit what if they cant see it? :P aha

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Haha, yeah, I'm full of surprises. It's going to get more interesting as the story progresses.

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Haha, yeah, that family has some weird powers. And awesome! I lost my cat that was named Toulouse, so I praise you. :)

And it's fine, human error is most definitely allowed. :)

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Thanks for the story comment! <333
Yep, shit definitely went down! haha Glad you liked it! :D
We'll try and get another update up soon! :)

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It's mainly because of how I'm working with the conception date, and who the actual father is and whatnot. Regardless of who, and if I change the father, her unborn child won't know who his/her father is, because Lily will be running off to Berlin with Wilhelm.

But I could change it, and have Matthieu's line live on, but I don't know, I've sort of already have an idea in mind, but I could.

You never know.

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Don't worry about it, life happens. I'll be starting school a week from Monday, so the updates won't be as frequent anyway. :)

That is an idea, because she was an important character, and that thought never crossed my mind. As to the mental institution one, I will be writing it, it's just a matter of when. And look at it this way, every series has at least one story that a reader doesn't like. :)

I won't be heartbroken if you don't read it, and I won't pressure either. So don't worry about it. :)

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Haha that's fine, because he is German, and I like to stick with actual names regarding their nationality, minus Lily and Ella of course, it's fine. :)

I won't say anything about your predictions, only that your on the right track. ;)

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hey, thanks for commenting on playground eyes! I just updated chapter 12, if your interested
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Thanks for the comment once more. :)

Haha, I liked the whole "preggo in the eggo", that made me chuckle. :)

I already have planned what will happen to all three of her beaus, and who she'll end up with. I'm sure it's pretty obvious, but still. As for her being pregnant, I'll be adding that factor in, but as to who the father of her future child will be, I won't say anything yet. Like to keep it a surprise and leave the readers guessing. Although I'm sure it won't be too hard to figure out, if readers can see through the smoke and mirrors.

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Your comment made me laugh because that was an error that I put in by mistake, but I'll make something of it. Because of the trauma from the rape, and the guilt that was swarming through her with the bedding of her brother-in-law, along with other things, I'll say she completely spaced it. And as she skimmed it, it might not have stuck in her brain, because she chose to deny it.

In all honesty, I spaced it, the last update was hard for me to write as I've stated in the author's not. Although the funny thing is, I read that section while I was working on it earlier today.

Thanks for pointing out the error, and I will fix it as the story progresses. For now I'd say she chose to ignore it, because he laid that all out for her with the resistance and whatnot.

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Awesome! If you would message me your email address, I'll forward chapters one and two to you. :) It'll be a slow process though, with editing and rewriting the whole thing, so when I forward what I have done to everyone, it won't be often.

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I was wondering why you didn't comment on the chapter two, part two update. :)

Mainly because all my commenters are ones who always comment after I post something, so it gets me a little worried. But that's good that your internet is back on. :)

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Don't worry, you're long message didn't bother me. :) And it's understandable about your cat not liking the stray, mine are the same way when a new cat comes home.

As for your predictions, I don't know what exactly will pan out, but I do know that Matthieu will find out about Lily's gentleman, how, I don't know, but it will be happening.

But I still have to sit and think on where I want to take this story. I got an idea for the ending (I know, far away, but I still think about it) a few days ago, and if I go with it, not too many readers will be happy, but that was just one idea.

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Aww, you still should have brought the cat in, hahaha I'm just kidding, I don't want you to get into any shit with your mom because the author of one of the stories you're reading suggest it. :) But you can always get an orange, male cat too. :)

Anyway, yeah, there's a few other readers who like Matthieu, and as for Lily loving him or not, I haven't really decided if she fully loves him or not. I might, and I just had some ideas running through my head regarding the two of them. I don't know, I might use it, I might not.

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Thanks for the comment on "Temptress of Paris". :)

Oh, it's okay. And for some reason Mibba doesn't like notifying my readers of an update, even if it is a sequel. An email should automatically go out, because you're subscribed to the prequel. I don't know, it's just a pain in the ass sometimes.

Anyway, I'm happy you've enjoyed the first two chapters. :)

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