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  • EleganceandFlaws

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    Whacha got in mind?
    December 8th, 2009 at 08:16am
  • EleganceandFlaws

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    Well, if it's a chore, then forget I said anything, hmm? lol
    December 8th, 2009 at 07:30am
  • sugarplum.

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    Ugh I hate when it goes really cold like that, you just know that snow is on it's way. It's a icy cold too which is horrible.
    December 8th, 2009 at 07:29am
  • EleganceandFlaws

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    Don't give up. You have good ideas, you just need to work on presenting the material, that's all. It just takes a little practice, hun, it's okay. You're only 13, you have Loads of time for your writing to evolve. I promise :D
    December 8th, 2009 at 06:47am
  • EleganceandFlaws

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    Read chapter. You've got a good plot going. Most of the story flows, but writing "fast forward 30 minutes" kinda interrupts that nice flow. You say she woke up late? Tweak it slightly to where she realizes "OMG, I'm late!" and runs out the door and fights the traffic. Writing "ff 30 mins" seems like you can't figure out anything to put there, but with your creative mind, I doubt that's plausible.
    Now, I'm not being mean about this, I'm just wanted to give you some advice I had to learn for myself. Sorry if it seems rude.
    December 8th, 2009 at 06:28am
  • EleganceandFlaws

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    I doubt that. Lemme take a look and I'll tell you honestly what I think, hmm? How's that sound?
    December 8th, 2009 at 06:08am
  • EleganceandFlaws

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    Thank you, dear.
    When I'm done doing a few things, I'll come read your stuff :D
    December 8th, 2009 at 03:53am
  • EleganceandFlaws

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    Hi there. I replied to your "Introduce Yourself" forum post :D
    December 8th, 2009 at 02:59am
  • Midnight. Shadows.

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    Hey! Thanks for the comment on A Way to a man's heart etc... long name i know. I'll try to update soon!
    December 7th, 2009 at 08:00am
  • sugarplum.

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    Well if that happens then we can also start another round of questions :)

    So how have you been lately?
    December 7th, 2009 at 04:36am
  • sugarplum.

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    Yeah I kind of am, what about you?
    December 7th, 2009 at 04:33am
  • sugarplum.

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    Cool, I have both ears done twice :)
    December 7th, 2009 at 01:58am
  • sugarplum.

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    Nice life plan =D I have a Acer desk top but I'm hoping to get a laptop for Christmas! Now I just have to find a laptop that I like and have everything I need in it.

    Do you wear a lot of jewelry?
    December 7th, 2009 at 01:06am
  • Jamie Glynn;

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    Ah, good reason.
    December 6th, 2009 at 04:10pm
  • sugarplum.

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    Nope I don't but I wish I could.

    Oh what's this master life plan?
    December 6th, 2009 at 12:13pm
  • sugarplum.

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    Yes I am.

    Do you have a boyfriend? Or girlfriend? Or are you single?
    December 6th, 2009 at 11:28am
  • sugarplum.

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    Apple gum =D

    Favorite fruit?
    December 6th, 2009 at 10:58am
  • sugarplum.

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    Any good music channel.

    Do you wear contact lens or just glasses?
    December 6th, 2009 at 10:41am
  • Jamie Glynn;

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    You probably are, post it up here, you'll probably get responses.
    December 6th, 2009 at 06:35am
  • sugarplum.

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    Vodka, I'll probably drink anything with vodka in it.

    Favorite ice cream flavor?
    December 6th, 2009 at 05:27am
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