CeraRachel / Comments

Reply to your comment on Innocence (An Abuse Story): "Hi! I think you're a really good storyteller, and the narrator has a lot of likable traits and that's a definite must for any story. The only real advice I have for you here is that when you're writing your dialogue, say it out loud, with every possible inflection, and maybe run it by a focus group of readers. Its seems slightly stiff. Also, there were minimal grammatical errors. Great work, very thought provoking."

Thanks, I've been working hard. :) I can't do that, unless I share it online because I'm honestly too embaressed to let anyone read my stories in real life (they naturally don't have any editing done when I write it down on paper). But, to be honest. I'm free-writing Innocence, anyways thanks. :)

Hahaha you're welcome love! I like your profile by the way ♥

Thank you so much for your comment on "Ana"! I added a trigger warning, thanks for pointing that out, I should have thought of that. I'm glad you liked it. I'll keep writing. :)

Gracias for the comment on GH. Glad you're diggin' it so far!
xxx Bee

Thank you so much for the comment on she whispers :] that was actually helpful :]

You updated!!!! EEEEEEEE!!! So super excited right now. thank you.

Thank you for the comment on my story.

Check out my friends list for unknownxcelebrity, she made the awesome layout to go with the story.

Thank you SO much for reviewing! I really appreciate your cooperation.

The winners for The Song-fic contest are now posted. You can head over there and see if you won. Thank you again for joining my contest. <3

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good :) I would hate to see this story stop. I'd rather there be a long hiatus than it being gone.

You're welcome, love!

Your very much welcome :)

That makes me excited when you write more. My friend always laughs at me cause i get really excited.

I just started school too -__- I'm always too tired to write.

Yay for un-official fan clubs! I'm glad, Lol i won't stalk you. I'm glad my comments don't bother you. I'm just very excited for updates. =]

I'm excited now xD

It is so good and okay, i was worried I was bothering you.

Oh xD sorry.

Not a problem. I completely understand. I am patient enough to wait. Thank you for letting me know and I hope the stress goes away. Feel better =D

No problem! Believe me, it was well worth the time and the effort.
It was an amazing chapter that kept my eyes glued to my phone's screen xD
Cannot wait to see how it ends.<333