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  • Clarity

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    Reply to your comment on Innocence (An Abuse Story): "Hi! I think you're a really good storyteller, and the narrator has a lot of likable traits and that's a definite must for any story. The only real advice I have for you here is that when you're writing your dialogue, say it out loud, with every possible inflection, and maybe run it by a focus group of readers. Its seems slightly stiff. Also, there were minimal grammatical errors. Great work, very thought provoking."

    Thanks, I've been working hard. :) I can't do that, unless I share it online because I'm honestly too embaressed to let anyone read my stories in real life (they naturally don't have any editing done when I write it down on paper). But, to be honest. I'm free-writing Innocence, anyways thanks. :)
    June 20th, 2012 at 05:20am
  • sleepingonthewaves

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    Hahaha you're welcome love! I like your profile by the way ♥
    June 20th, 2012 at 03:57am
  • alison.wonderland

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    Thank you so much for your comment on "Ana"! I added a trigger warning, thanks for pointing that out, I should have thought of that. I'm glad you liked it. I'll keep writing. :)
    June 20th, 2012 at 03:15am
  • Average Lifesaver;;

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    Gracias for the comment on GH. Glad you're diggin' it so far!
    xxx Bee
    June 19th, 2012 at 02:08am
  • KidsFromYesterday182

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    Thank you so much for the comment on she whispers :] that was actually helpful :]
    June 19th, 2012 at 12:44am
  • LoverDearest..

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    You updated!!!! EEEEEEEE!!! So super excited right now. thank you.
    June 11th, 2012 at 07:00am
  • orange county.

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    Thank you for the comment on my story.

    Check out my friends list for unknownxcelebrity, she made the awesome layout to go with the story.
    June 11th, 2012 at 12:09am
  • AHLICE

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    Thank you SO much for reviewing! I really appreciate your cooperation.
    April 28th, 2012 at 01:20am
  • han jisung xx

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    The winners for The Song-fic contest are now posted. You can head over there and see if you won. Thank you again for joining my contest. <3

    http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/172954/
    March 15th, 2012 at 03:50am
  • broskees.

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    good :) I would hate to see this story stop. I'd rather there be a long hiatus than it being gone.
    December 24th, 2011 at 04:23am
  • DontMindJessie

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    You're welcome, love!
    November 27th, 2011 at 02:18am
  • Skidaddle13

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    Your very much welcome :)
    October 3rd, 2011 at 12:53am
  • LoverDearest..

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    That makes me excited when you write more. My friend always laughs at me cause i get really excited.
    August 25th, 2011 at 07:29am
  • broskees.

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    I just started school too -__- I'm always too tired to write.
    August 24th, 2011 at 02:42am
  • LoverDearest..

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    Yay for un-official fan clubs! I'm glad, Lol i won't stalk you. I'm glad my comments don't bother you. I'm just very excited for updates. =]
    August 24th, 2011 at 01:05am
  • broskees.

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    I'm excited now xD
    August 23rd, 2011 at 01:36am
  • LoverDearest..

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    It is so good and okay, i was worried I was bothering you.
    August 23rd, 2011 at 01:19am
  • broskees.

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    Oh xD sorry.
    August 22nd, 2011 at 11:22pm
  • LoverDearest..

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    Not a problem. I completely understand. I am patient enough to wait. Thank you for letting me know and I hope the stress goes away. Feel better =D
    August 10th, 2011 at 06:29am
  • Zeldarae

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    No problem! Believe me, it was well worth the time and the effort.
    It was an amazing chapter that kept my eyes glued to my phone's screen xD
    Cannot wait to see how it ends.<333
    July 11th, 2011 at 07:38am
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