I did. I told you you needed to work on your grammar and explained why. Poetry is a more concise form of prose. Which means your grammar needs to be very tight or it can become exhausting to read.
thanku for that comment on my poem
yerr i was really crushed about what happened wid dat dude and then
i wrote that and i felt loads better and ur comment
was soo nice it brought a smile to my face for the first time in a whole week.
so once again thanku from me and my friends who can once again see me smile.