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Thanks for sharing your views on my article! You definitely make a lot of good points. :)

It was originally a research paper that I had to do based off of Fahrenheit 451, and it required a certain number of quotes. Though it's pretty evident that I probably did a lot more than required. That was mainly because I felt like I was repeating myself, and I kept finding a lot of good quotes.
Yeah, that last bit you mentioned I hadn't looked into very well, which is also evident. I put this article up hastily before I even proofread it, which was how it was turned in as well (seeing as it was already over due).
Anyway, I am actually contemplating rewriting the whole thing when I have time this summer, just because I want to perfect it.
Lastly, thank you very much and I appreciate your views and criticism on the piece, and it is duly noted. ;D

-Jordan (MusicRises)

Hedy, Part two is out now, probably not that good, but I can't get in many ideas!

[i]Situations Are Critical [/i] is back and running :)

Hey :D
Just to let you know due to my ignorance and lack of knowledge on some Harry Potter related pieces of information in my story, [i] Situations Are Critical, [/i] the story will be taken down so I can edit it & take all your comments into consideration. The editing will take a couple weeks and once I get my friend to help me out with editing and such, it'll be back up. Thank you for offering your thoughts & advice, they made me realise a lot was wrong xD

so keep an eye out for the new edited version in a couple of weeks! :)
thank you

Yeah, i'm pretty sure it was meant to be malfoy manor. To be honest, I pictured the outside exactly the same in my head, and I knew the inside was going to be big and imposing...but I didn't think it was [i]that[/i] big. It's an awesome house! Yeah, I'm not a big fan of 3D, but I wouldn't mind seeing it in 3D, because, yeah, the snake parts would be scary. Especially when Nagini is sliding along the table towards -Is it Charity Burbage or something?-

No prob :) your story is great :D
and anyways, yeah that shot of Snape is pretty epic :D i love the whole scene with Harry and Slughorn, just after Harry takes the liquid luck potion. so funny :D but i hate that they took out the whole battle at hogwarts at the end, and that they replaced it with something really anticlimatic. plus they took out dumbledores funeral... and the whole wedding preparations with Bill and Fleur... oh and the whole part at the end where Bill gets bit by Fenrir, and Fleur says she'll love him no matter what he looks like. i LOVE that part. and all the little stuff like harry saying "no need to call me sir, professor" and stuff like that.

ahh yeah i hate when they alter the story. especially when they take out stuff that really was in the book, and replace it with stuff that wasn't. it would be so epic if they redid the harry potter movies and actually made them follow the book.

and NO! not yet! it comes out tonight at midnight, so I'm wearing my Harry Potter shirt and counting down the hours :D

haha yeah it sucks but i still manage to read your updates :)

but i love the depth of your characters, because you really take your story to a whole new level:)

aaaand i just saw you updated so im off to go read

Aha, yeah, well, people, ghosts, like him are more interesting. They have more of a history. I like commenting :) And I like updates! So if my commenting makes you want to update faster, than comment i shall. :3

You're welcome,
oh well, I'm looking forward to the revealing of the plot behind the story. C:

it was relatable, so yeah.

i am wonderful:)) i read your perfection story, it was very good

ahaha, so true.
on the plus side, i fiiiiiiiiinally got my laptop back today(;

haha yeah, i couldn't work out how to charge the charger though.
it's really weird, you use the computer lol

hahaha, yeah. and technology just seems to hate me. every week i fuck something up. this time it was my phone; left the charger in some random hotel in manchester so today i had to buy this really weird thing that's like a multi-charger. i don't even know how it works, but it kind of did(:

oooh, i dunno. mine has instructions on this blue screen telling you what to do if you've seen it more than once, and every time i start reading with the intention of actually doing it. but then every time i give up half way through and just re-start it lol

haha, aw my computer breaks down all the time. it has some sort of 'serious error' which makes it just shut down constantly, and i can never be bothered to actually try and fix it haha

haha awesome(:
definately can't complain then!

lol would've been funnier if it was a total weirdo though!

haha faiir enough. at least he's nice & you weren't hugged by a total weirdoP:

rofl. haha aw. i love stupid rumours and stuff, they always make me laugh.