I also did like the idea of Lyra being a sylph with Grigore which is why her death was very close to happening. Other endings included Grigore dying or both of them dying but Lyra's death seemed to work better. As everyone wanted her alive, I kept her alive as I have a strong idea of what she would be like in several years time. But thanks for the comment and for reading :3 It is appreciated.
Hey, you asked me to notify you when I posted the rewrite of Awake and Unafraid :) I'm just letting you know, it's posted :3 http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/483058/Disenchanted/ I'd also like to say thanks for sticking with Awake and Unafraid, it means so much more than I could ever say :) And yes, I am going to delete Awake and Unafraid. I'm sorry :(
Thank you for your comment! I'm glad you kinda liked the twist. xD I wasn't sure if anyone would like it at all, to be honest. Especially with how anti-Liza everyone is. xD But it will eventually start to work itself out. It just won't happen overnight. lmao