Thank you so much for your comment on my story :) it was extremely sweet of you. I noticed that you are entering in tge sake contest entry as I am. Hopefully we'll both do well :)
Thank you.
And as an author, I'm not happy with how I ended it.
I think I was eager to end it, though so that's why I rushed it.
I appreciate your opinion most of all because of what you said.
I will re-write it in the future, but thank you for your honesty