Seventhsail / Comments

yay. becuase i was going to start a strike or a rally, (wichever happened to strike my fancy) to persuade you.
i love it, its so nice to read a quality story.

i just finnished The Missing Maulan, and i loved it. your gramar and sentance structure as well as vocabulary is superb. its nice to see that here, you dont very often, sequal?

Yeah I read it already, thanks! I'll try to improve the choppiness. My reading hobby died long ago so my sentence structure ain't that good. I like the fact that you're wordy by the way! It's nice that you point out errors and the causes unlike some people who throw flames without a reason.

Thanks for following my story! I appreciate it! :D

Hey! I read your review on Nikita's story and I was wondering if you could do that for one of mine? There aren't many grammatical errors from what Microsoft Word could tell (besides sentence fragments, that is. But it's mainly 'witty retort' sentences.) However, something seems to be preventing me from gaining readers/subscribers. The people who have subscribed said it was good, great even, but something seems to be detracting from the other 18 people. The story is Dying Earth, and it's on my profile.

And I would really appreciate it if you would tell me of any accidental spelling errors.

Hey thanks for the comment on my story! By the way, what do you mean by the sentence structure can get a little 'choppy'? I'm an amateur author so I'd really love your guidance to help improve my writing! :)

welcome to mibba! come check out ma profile and maybe even join this awesome international sorority I'm running! It'd be awesome to have you!

Welcome to mibba!
I'm Cameron.Really hope you like it here.Hope we can b great friends!

love your story :D your very talented :)

hey how are you?
my names Jamie and welcome to Mibba!!!