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Haha, thanks.
From what I read on your profile, you seem pretty cool, too.(:
I'm addicted to Vitamin Water, too. I collect the labels. XP
Yeah... I'm weird.

Hey, hey. Thanks for adding me.(:
I'm Sarah. What's up?

thanks xD

and you`re welcome.

your welcome (: i'm alanis.

my grades were bad and my mom said if i dont raise them she will disconnect the computer

Hi i'm Kristen : )

hey. (:
thanks for the request.
hope to get to know you more. in a friendly way.

awesome layout. xD

ello darlin,
hows it going?

[b]sure![/b]

[b]nothing really, and thank you![/b]

[b]hey hey! im marie![/b]

ohh haha great xD

hey,
thanks for the request!
how are you? (:

No, it's not too personal. All my friends know about my OCD issues. Well, for one thing all my pens and pencils in my pencil case have to face a certain way. And my makeup is organized into sections and if anyone moves lets say the eye shadow to the eyeliner I have freak attacks. I have to have all my money unfolded and facing the right way in my wallet. I have a morning ritual that no one can get me out of. I count when I brush my teeth and I count when I walk. My OCD basically revolves around control.

I don't have any phobias, but I have a lot of control issues.

Yeah. I have major OCD. My mom also thinks I'm neurotic. haha. I sure hope not, but I wouldn't be surprised.

oh, thank you! I finished the revision too! If you ever need to revise something, don't hesitate to ask. :]

Yeah, no prob. And thank you! I'm glad you like it! I'm hoping to get some more layouts up next week because I have thursday and friday off!

Sure, sure. I've got dialogue down pretty well. So, say you're having a conversation, just two people.

"Hello," Janny said.
"How are you?" Devin replied.

Okay, so when Janny said hello, there was a comma in the quote because hello is a fragment. But when Devin said how are you there was a question mark because his sentence wasn't a fragment. In dialogue you're allowed to have fragments but you must always use commas and not periods but the tag afterwards must end in a period. Like so:

"Jesus[b],[/b]" Kallie cursed[b].[/b]

This is incorrect:

"Jesus[b].[/b]" Kallie cursed[b],[/b]

Because Kallie cursed is a sentence. It has a subject and verb so that will always end in a period.

Next is when someone is talking for a long while, like so:

"But mom!" Jenny whined. "I've been dying to go to this party!"

When you write dialogue that is continuing you must keep in mind what is a sentence and what is a fragment. You can continue like that for as long as you please as long as you use the correct punctuation, like this:

"And," Mia breathed heavily. "I was like no way!" She threw her hands up. "And he was like," she deepened her voice. "Yes way!"

Do you see what I mean? And he was like isn't a sentence so it ends in a comma. Another thing you should remember that is very important is this:

"But," [b]she[/b] cried.
"But," [b]She[/b] cried.

The second one is incorrect. Because the dialogue ends in a comma the tag afterwards must be lowercase unless it is a name like so:

"But," Jenny cried.

That would be capitalized.

Same goes for sentences:

"I know how to tie my shoes." [b]She[/b] said.

That would be capitalized because [b]She[/b] starts a new sentence.

Any questions?

no prob. I understand. :]