thanks for reading and yea i guess it kinda is.. but she dies.. then the story changes alot... but if no one really likes it then im not gonna bother with it ya know?
dude I just wrote the first chapter of my new story, care to have a looksy and give me feedback?
It's called "into abeyance"
http://www.mibba.com/story/_40115/_68635/
haha no actually im from detroit...but as i was watching the stanley cup finals, i noticed how hot sidney was and decided to write a story with him in it! lol
Hiya,
sorry I haven't talked to you in a while, but I did get your comment on my story and yes I shall update as soon as I get out of writer's block. The answer to your question about Tom. In the chapter where Kay dies, she meets Tom on the bus, the guy who hands her the handkerchief. He does actually become a main character later on, but I just haven't had the time to write anything more. I hope I provided you with the information that you required to your question. And I also hope you have enjoyed it so far.