Katie Mosing / Comments

Thanks. :) I need help editing, I'm only 16 and I'm not a very good editing my own stuff. Lol. I know I have grammar issues, but I guess in time I will get better and hopefully if I get to the chance to show a story to an publisher maybe an editor would swoop down and save me? Lol. I'm extremely weird, so sorry. :S And, well thanks. :D I kind of read the hunger games, which lead me to writing that. Though other than the fact they both take place in the imaginary future. I wanted to write something similar after I read it, but I decided that I could get in trouble with a story like that. So I decided not to and to be creative and make up my own plot, characters and stories. I'm also not one for fan fiction. But I want your honest opinion, do you like it? And um, if it was all edited and stuff and in a bookstore... Would you buy it?

Also thanks once again! :3 I can come up with really unique plots and stuff off the top of my head. Now writing it, is a different story. :P But anyway, if you ever need advice on what kind of story to write or for a plot. I recomend you come to me. :S Especially if you get a writers block or something. But, uh I bet you have other people you can go to. :P I just like to help. :S

*Sorry once again, I'm weird, random, awkward and yeah that just explains me.*

Thank you for the comment, haha! I can't believe it led you to something you've already read, that's pretty funny!

Thanks so much for your comment!
I'm really excited to write this, I hope I do well in the competition! The next two chapters are full of Sophie being her paranoid self. I hope you'll stick around to see what she gets into!

Thanks for the comment. I appreciate you actually reading it and giving your honest opinion :-)

I think that's what every girl needs after a breakup, a little bit of funny :-)

Hey thanks for your comment on my story. I really like this whole comment swap thing! Anyway I should really go back and look at my grammatical errors, it's been a while and my grammar has probably improved. As for why arianna isn't shocked or upset that she is dead, later on in the story the reader learns that she killed herself so... That explains that. But thanks for your constructive criticism! I appreciate it.

Thanks for the comment! Boring? Oh well! I'm not very good at drabbles :P thought I'd give it a try though, it's hard to write something in under a hundred words, even then I went over.
I'll keep that in mind though! Don't think I'll do anymore!

Thanks for your comment on my story :) I appreciate that you actually took the time to read it as opposed to some people just saying "I like it" or something along those lines.

Hi, I just wanted to say thank you for reading my crappy fanfic and providing constructive criticism without being ugly about it. It was nice of you to read it in the first place even though the style, characters and concept wasn't your cup of tea. hah. It's an old story aimed at a particular audience. That's no excuse for bad writing. But that specific audience typically enjoys it. But yeah anyways thank you.:3

You're so welcome! I hoped I didn't sound stupid, haha c:

ah okay, no i get it 'curb' is like um sidewalk? i guess. it's just an english word, i don't know if it's used in america.

Oh yeah, I seen the original Eye but didn't realize it until I had seen the American one. I was like 'wow... this is really reminding me of a different movie it's almost unreal.' That was a super good movie. Thank you for the recommendation I will certainly check it out. :)

thanks for the comment, i really appreciate it, although the grammar is correct. it's 'she is' so it shortens to 'she's' and 'it is' so it shortens to 'it's'. unless it's something else that i've totally missed. <3

Thanks for taking the time to read up on my short story and comment. Yeah, I find I tend on the more descriptive than action-filled side of things, so that's probably why not much seems to happen, haha. Thanks anyhow!

No problem! I'm glad I helped (:

Thanks for commenting. I need to hear those types of honest opinions. I'm working on shortening my descriptions, I get carried away sometimes lol. Thanks so much for your honesty. Xo

Thank you so much for your comment :) i'll try to go back and fix it :D

Thank you so much for your comment. Alyssa and I appreciate all the love we get and it keeps us writing. :) You're encouragement helps us help you. Thanks again.

Thank you for the comment. The first chapter was more of a sneak peak of the future and the second chapter was were I started the story off. I know its confusing, but I'm glad you liked it. Thank you again.

Thank you for the story comment. :)