Katie Mosing / Comments

Ok a crib would be it then (forget terms are different sometimes).

I'm not getting that defensive, I just don't quite understand how you thought they were too long and not starting with a new idea, or how my writing conveyed that it was a baby and not a child. Clearly the idea that it was a child's imagination is crucial to the story, so I'm wondering how that wasn't conveyed for you, or how it was conveyed that the child was younger than what I was trying to portray him as.

Thanks for the comment on GH.

All of her history comes out in the next few chapters, I didn't want to make the first chapter more boring by loading it with back story.

As for the choppiness, I'll be sure to go through and fix it up.

xxx Bee

My Six Billion Secrets Contest [http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/post/7910515/] Ended today, and you haven't turned in your entry, you have a till tomorrow or the next day to turn in your entry or you will be disqualified, I wont be taking any more requests for extentions. I'm sorry if I'm sounding harsh, but I need to get this contest done because I have so much going on right now. Thanks(:

Hey, just wanted to send out one last reminder that your entry for the I can't contest needs to be entered on the 26th.

If you have any questions or have a feeling you won't be able to complete this, please let me know.

Hii, just another reminder that the 'I can't' contest ends in a week. So, if you have anything that concerns you, please let me know. :D

Look forward to seeing your entry!

Hey there, I would just like to let you know that the "I can't" contest has two weeks until deadline. I know you just entered a week ago, but I like to keep people updated. :D I seem to work better when I know what's going on.. Hahha.

Anywho, let me know if there is anything that concerns you and we will work it out, if not, just keep writing!! I look forward to seein' your entry.

Hey, just wanted to let you know the deadline for the "I can't" contest has been set for October 26th. If you have any trouble with that, let me know so I can get it adjusted now. :D

Thank you!

Hallo. I'm Emily =]

and too many posers O.O
other than that...well it was still a bad website xD
so howd u hear about mibba?

And taking out the trash xD

Hells yeah.
That's what men are made for x]

Shirts? lol
Hhahaha we're going to the movies actually x

Hahahaha I know(:
We're gonna hang out sometime this week x]

Neither do I.
I've never written slah before, but I've written fan-fics in like 7th grade. Lol.

it was just half fine...

yeah haha, my school is weird.
hah
sooo
how's your day?

No worries I'm already texting him right now(:

Mhmm.
Sooo.
What kind of stories do you like to write?

Yeah, I know. I'm pretty amazed everytime I think about it.
I'm pretty sure I'm stuck with him, because I don't think anyone can measure up to him. :]

oh really? haha