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Gross, lol

Um... what's something I'v done...

I've dislocated the inside of my jaw and been temp. blinded all in one sitting... and I've broken my elbow to the point where it was almost sticking out of my skin...

Yeah... that cyst thing is bad...

Lol

I was the same way.

He's the lead singer for the band Tokio Hotel and I guess in 2008 he had surgery for a cyst to be removed from his vocal cords.

My challenge was to write about that surgery as if something had gone wrong.

So I introduced him to American sign language since the scapel sliced his vocal cords.

It was interseting to write.

Ah...

Poor guy...

Do you know who looks like a girl?

Bill Kaulitz.

I had to do a contest one shot on him and I was very surprised...

Especially since I didn't know who he was before the contest....

Your right... it is confusing...

Does he want to be a girl?

Let me know if you do 'cause it sounds interesting...

And I may be able to do it...

In my story Quasar was full of humans who always fought for the best weapon, so scientists merged the DNA if humans and animals which made shifters.

The shifters rioted and kill all but two humans. Those two managed to get into a time-like transporter (which, because of their technology, exists) and they travelled to Earth, but forgot everything but the intelligent eyes of the shifters...

So it kind of leads into Adam and Eve and then the myths of werewolves and such...

It's a little confusing, lol

Ah... no

That is awkward since (while possible, but rare without medication) virgins don't lactate...

And I don't think I'm that "creative".

No, Quasar is a the whole "scientist/weapon" thing and a world of shifters...

Which just proves I can't do the element girls, lol

Ah...

No.

I've never read that.. or anime..

Not that it's bad or anything, but the whole pictures with talk bubles confuses me...

Lol, my friend gave me an anime thing.. Inu-something...

Let's just say I sat their very confused, lol

But no, there's no relation.

Wow, that would be awesome!

I don't really know anything... just what my mind comes up with, lol.

Which is why I think I love my Quasar series the best because it's a world I created, lol

And I'm glad you like my idea, I was worried about the whole Fey thing...

Oh, ha

It's kind of based of a picture (okay totally based off a picture)

Here it is:

[IMG]http://i198.photobucket.com/albums/aa23/Amrsmith8/beautybeast.jpg[/IMG]

She's a model (the lions stuffed) and actually the beast. She's rude and mean and it's all about her.

Then (because it is a fairy tale) a Fey Lord messes with her life and forces her to live like a 'commoner'.

And of course she meets beauty, but he wants nothing to do with her...

But of course she changes (because beauty and the beast is a love story) and they fall in love...

Sound twisty enough?

Lol, similar.

Mine wasn't as thought out as yours, the idea was to do one element at a time, tell her story, then go on to the next. As the stories progressed they would each have a part in saving the world...

And, of course, the scientist was the father of one of the girls...

But I think I stopped it because a few other people were writing something similar...

Not to mention I pu the whole parental scientist in my Freedom story...

So then again I probably won't rewrite them... I think I'll stick to my Quasar stories...

Maybe a few more Angel stories...

and I'm not big on fanfic wither, but that's only because when you're writing one you really don't know how that celebrity will react and what their true personality is.

Though I love disney! And have a done Beauty/Beast type story.

And I'm doing another beauty/beast twist for a contest...

Dang that really sucks.

I have a story that I put on a nother site.

It's about a mad scientist who creates a weapon blending young girls with the fire, water, eath, or wind elements.

Lol, I guess you can say I'm into the whole evil scientist and good/evil thing.

I had finished one and was working on the second when I just stopped....

Hmm... maybe I'll rewrite them and put them on here...

I've tried to preplan, but I seem to work best when I just start typing...

Everything I submit I had just finished writing...

Except for the first few chapters of Slave, but that's because it was an old story of mine I didn't finish...

I was never able to actually finish a story before, but now I've finished so much more then I thought I ever would, lol

Yeah, same here...

But I also like to stop it when the story says too... basically at a really crucial cliffhanger.

Yeah, I thought the longer the chapters the better, but it seems the shorter the chapters the more people like it.

Smurf is like my bestest friend here. She's been with me since my first story, Slave.

And thanks for reminding me about the descriptions... I always forget that, lol

I'll try to do better in the next update.

The sequel's already started, though I didn't think about putting the sins in... I may just do that if I can figure out a way...

Anyways, I hope you like Sacrifice.

Those green round shapped things?

Yeah, I know what you mean, but it sort of jumps around a little. Like half the time its in present tense, but the other half is past tense. But, its good any way and I look forward to reading more of it :D I updated by the way :) If you wanted to check it out.

I know the feeling. At times I get scared when the rain comes in Ensenada cause we're almost in a ditch. We are surrounded by mountains it's crazy. Though it barely rains their. maybe twice a year if we're lucky, but it rains hard. I mean REAL HARD when it does. I used to have a Kenepa(sp?) in my yard so that was kind of my hobby. To pick them and eat them lol

lol my mom says i have family all over. Barranquitas is a small almost like the "country" side of puerto rico. Not many tourists would go there too many hills and you feel like your going to die when the car is towards the end of a cliff. which is most of the part of the island.