October 11th, 2009 at 04:47pm
Bella.Love.Bella / Comments
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well, i cant really read the first words cuz the city image its behind them, and if the text is black its almost impossible to read, maybe you could change the image, or the font, or the positions of bothOctober 11th, 2009 at 04:23pm
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alright. ahaOctober 11th, 2009 at 04:13pm
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hmmm, i'm not sure,
try making the font smaller so it can fit.October 11th, 2009 at 04:12pm -
some of it, i canOctober 11th, 2009 at 04:03pm
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well its fine except for the beginning cause it cuts off some of the words.October 11th, 2009 at 03:51pm
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i'm starting to read, "bad boy loves me" its good so far. =DOctober 11th, 2009 at 03:19pm
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no, thanks to you :D
keep writing, you are good :)October 11th, 2009 at 03:18pm -
your welcome! :)
its good, and interesting!
a suggestion, the background interferes a bit with the first words :S
its a bit hard to readOctober 11th, 2009 at 03:12pm -
ahah thanks for the story comment,
i'm actually really excited for it. =DOctober 11th, 2009 at 03:09pm -
YEAH!!!
going to check it out right now ;DOctober 11th, 2009 at 03:06pm -
sure! :DOctober 11th, 2009 at 02:56pm
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haha xDOctober 11th, 2009 at 02:48pm
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well, i like Tyler, but for what he did yeah, just a bit.
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yeah i bet they were xD
i was excited cuz you put "be warned" and i was like,
o_O FINALLY! xDOctober 11th, 2009 at 02:27pm -
:D really love youre story
and last chapter i was like, *o*
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Yay!
looking forward to it :DOctober 11th, 2009 at 02:08pm -
Woah dude, whhhaaat the heck?October 11th, 2009 at 12:33pm
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Naw its cool with me if you know her. And she knows its on here. I don't really care but I was accused of plagarizing once for my own story and every one believed she was there first so I had to delete MY story. But if you know her and shes cool with it I don't care.October 11th, 2009 at 09:49am
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aWAit you did write it right? Or at least know the person who did? Cuz if not you suck for plagarizing. And if not congrats on being a good writer.October 11th, 2009 at 09:29am
but i'm not sure if we're looking at the same story,
is it mr bad boy meet miss good girl? thats the one i'm looking at LOL