True. I'd return the favor but I don't read stories on here. If after posting the rest of the chapters I get bored I'll take a look at your stories. I can't promise anything though; I'm pretty good with staying occupied.
Thank you for your comment and advice. I see you've been helping others as well. The story is actually an older one that I had posted on here last year. The chapters I'm currently typing up and posting are old ones. When I start writing the newer ones that follow I'll definitely look back and try use your advice to the best of my ability.
Thanks for the feedback.. But I like the way me and Samuri write. It's short, to the point.. Helps the story flow a bit better than dwelling on the area.
Its not my fault you wasted your time.
I understand you're a serious writer and you were trying to help, babe. Stories are just for fun with me. I take my poems and lyrics seriously. But now you can use your time with others who take your comments with value.
Thank you so much for the feedback! I am glad that you gave me criticism, and I will consider it while writing. I am not one for super heavy detail, however.
i'm really bad with details, but it's more of like the person is me. (:
so i'm about to start college for professional writing, so i can get help with my suck-ish details in all my stories. lmao.
Thanks for the comment buddy but I don't like long descriptions. I'm impatient and get bored easily with them. I dont put alot of effort into my writing because I dont take it too seriously and don't want to spend time doing so. I'll improve my writing if I wish but its just fine the way it is. I'd read your story but it doesn't interest me and I'd probably get bored. Have a good day, babe.
Hello! Thank you for your feedback on my story. I started reading your book The Old Religion, but its very difficult to do so on my cellular device. So whenever I have internet access I shall read it.
thanks...i guess? I am not going to change the way it's written because it's not a written story, it's actually what happens to me, and i've been writing it every so often, so i can't just add details because i don't remember exactly how things were when it happened.