i'll be very glad to give you ideas =) i absolutely adore the sotyrline! ime just very sucky at the writing part XD hehe, but i'll list a few ideas for plot twists and message them to you in the next comment?
very sorry =( i have nil knowledge of layouts and stuff =S
hmmm, well if you just aint 'feeling' the story, i think it would be better if you didnt make writing it a priority now; no point writing if you dont like it right? just do things at ur pace. plus, if its writer's block you got, i'm willing to put some ideas forward and if any of them sparks off a chain thought in ur head ur welcome to use it?
can i ask when you first started writing the story, was it one of those ideas that came out of nowhere and you just felt you had to write it down? or was it more of a you couldnt think of other ideas? not sure why i have to ask that but it just fits in with my reatrded way of thinking XD