Hey, so I replied to your comment on my story (cliches and compunctions) but I'm apparently a fucking idiot and didn't actually click the reply button, so I'm posting it here where you'll actually see it.
It's kinda my fault that you didn't imagine him how I did, I never really described Theo. Would you mind expanding on the time transitions being rushed, cause I think I know what you mean, but I want to know I'm interpreting it right. That's kind cool you had a dream about him. I'm sorry that there are so many misspellings, I proof read it twice before posting, but I have a really hard time proof reading my own stuff because my mind just put the missing words or letters in.
I'll keep trying to write them though, and I had the same problem! It was terrible and extremely irritating, I'm definitely going to look into reading that
i really wanted to see the movie this summer!!!!! except everyone i was like "HEY LET'S GO TO THE MOVIES" to was being a butt and was like "eh i don't want to see that blah blah"
i really like the book because it's written in a journalism kind of style supah cool
yessss girl i feel you, it's so hard to keep everything straight when you're playing around with so many different styles
@ electric. I'm the same way, zombie stories are just fascinating! And I haven't read that yet, I want to read it before I see the movie though! I've heard it was really good, and I agree, it is very easy for things to get tangked , I've learned the hard way (:
zombies are a hard thing to write about i think, a lot of subplots get tangled and the writing style gets compromised a lot but i'm pretty excited about this. i just wanted to write about zombies idk where that urge came from but it's whatev.
have you read world war z?! it's one of my faaaaves it's such a good book, the way it's written and it just fuels the zombie mania.
Five chapters are up. We're thinking about tweaking them a bit, as well as the layout. We have ten chapters written all together, but only five are posted. Comments are encouraged and appreaciated. 'u'
Thanks~