Little Monster / Comments

hahaa, well that sounds like that would have been awesome. :)
I had a good friend sitting with me at lunch, then she left, and i was sad D: hahaa, and then all my other friends just started changing so i was like fts, and just kind of zoned out. xD
History is stupid, we should be learning how to make rocketships instead! :D
It makes me think our teacher will just be a little stoner hippie person and let us do whatever in music appreciation xD. bahaa, i'm hoping i'll get lucky in art too.

Thanks! (:

Hahaa, me too. I had to sit with idiots last year at lunch because there was nobody there i knew. D:
Aw! Lucky! I wish our teachers were like that. I had the stupidest teachers last year. And my history teacher was a total dinosaur, irony.
I hear arts fun, but I hear that the one I'm probably getting won't be so fun.
I have music appreciation, and I hear that class is awesome, all we do is like, sit and listen to our ipods and talk about it. xD bahaaa.

Yeah. thats truee. But I would like someone i actually knew in my classes. Hahaa. Last year I got sooo close to my now best friend, because I didn't have anyone else in those classes. I was happy but then again not, because I didn't have my other best friend anywhere in my schedule.
Oh, i've always wanted to take artt :D, this year i'm hoping too. yay! :) hahaa.

yeah i get that. I normally don't have classes with my friends, which makes me mad. Haha.
I looove winter. <3 i like actually getting to walk outside and your hair staying PERFECT :D
Well, most of my friends are going with me to the new school. Because we have so many school where I come from and some wont be there but my best friends will. So thats good too. I'm just worried we won't have any classes! D:

Yeah, i love summer, but its wayyy hot. And I miss some of my friends. So i'm happy its summer and sort of sad and happy that its almost over. I'm going to a new school this year so its like, oh wow. no fun? :) hahaa.
school blows.

I'm working on the next part and I noticed it kind of strays from the prologue, or it's not mentioned, like the thing with Caleb. But I can do whatever I want as long as the story plays out the way it's really supposed to.

The person corrected me on stuff I spelled wrong and when I took my story down, she messaged me and asked why, how if I wanted to be a real writer I'd take the criticism and let people help me.

I don't want people who can't even follow the story to read it. I don't even know why that one person commented on here since she claimed to not understand it.

Hahaa. Thanks. My friend made it for me since I'm very very much mibba layoutly challenged. :)
Btw- how are you?(:

hahahahahah I love your profile XD
thanks for the story comment :] I'm going to start working on the next update soon :]

Your welcome :) your writing style is really good. It deserves compliments. Haha.
And I kind of sort of love your profile. :}.

I posted the first two chapters on another site and people are just dumb. One said the prologue was written at different times, or that's how it feels. It's obviously not. And apparently the bracelet found in the beginning sounds like it belongs to the boy. I could have sworn I said "her bracelet" since I am the author.

Something about the first chapter with "I don't understand how, if the protagonist is new, their two good friends already seem to go to the school. It's a bit confusing. Does anybody else find this, or is it just me?"

They aren't new, it's just a new year -_- So things feel like they did at the first day.

I commented that and explained how it's two days later. You can tell because not once have a I said ' a week later' or anything like that. I'll probably have everything happen within a week, unless that's just dumb.

Thanks for the comment.
Apparently the person above you was confused by the story and didn't get the whole student teacher thing but still liked it -__-
I'm trying for once to make this a simple story.
The first 15 chapters all take place during the first two days.
That's not hard to get.

Been okay lately. What about you?
Hunter's an important character. Well, to Tate he is.

Oh, thank you.
I'm trying to update quickly.

I do not. I don't like roller coasters, either.
Hah. Cedar Point by me is a camp ground. The road is windy and hill-like so my stomach doesn't appreciate it.
It's cool. I'm late with replies too.

I like Hockey and Soccer. I haven't played either in a long time.
I hate this heat -_- I looove my pool though.
Swimming is nice.
:D

haha yeah
the writer, John Green, is totally awesome. he and his brother have this youtube channel and it is hysterical... I totally sound like a John Green nerd but I am seriously in love with his writing style haha

It is sad, but oh so well wrtitten :]
Paper Towns is amazing all of his books have this perfect balance of teenage craziness/humor and these deep meanings that really make you think