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  • Rave on Spaceboy

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    You genuinely hit every single metaphor I wrote in "The Toymaker".
    I'm seriously stunned into silence right now...
    August 11th, 2010 at 05:52am
  • Rave on Spaceboy

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    Yes but did [i]you[/i] get a meaning out of any of the poems of mine you've happened across?
    Sometimes I feel I become too abstract in poetry, and I think if a publisher told me that it didn't make sense... well it would surely be disasterous.
    August 9th, 2010 at 05:03am
  • Rave on Spaceboy

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    I'm hoping that formula doesn't become redundant.
    I hope to maybe publish something, sometime, but my greatest doubt is that it doesn't make sense.
    August 8th, 2010 at 10:29pm
  • Rave on Spaceboy

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    Thank you :)
    Would you mind maybe checking out my lastest poem?
    August 8th, 2010 at 08:19pm
  • ART IS THE WEAPON

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    Thank you for the comment :D
    August 3rd, 2010 at 06:33am
  • playfulway

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    thank you :)
    August 2nd, 2010 at 02:27am
  • amberlynnwontforget

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    Thanks so much for the story comment (:

    & I know what you mean about letting it get
    loose.

    I loved your comment, it means a lot (:
    August 2nd, 2010 at 12:56am
  • playfulway

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    YESSS!!
    But I don't plan on deleting this one; it's the first one in awhile I feel connected too! :)
    And I will defiantly connect it in some sort of way
    August 1st, 2010 at 06:48pm
  • playfulway

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    Whoops!
    I thought I wrote you back!! AHH! I'm sorry! :(
    Thank you so much for that insightful comment. I know it does seem like it is going a little fast, but sometime I feel like it may be going a little slow. :P
    I just hope you continue to read and give me you feedback. I have info about the characters, but wasn't sure if I should post it. Do you think I should?
    August 1st, 2010 at 03:38pm
  • The Rev.

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    Thank you very much for the story comment (:
    July 31st, 2010 at 07:27am
  • Rissa_Lynn

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    Lol I'm kina like that but sometimes I'm just soo excited to see what people think since I worked soo hard on it I just go ahead and post. Because the sooner I do the sooner I get feed back lol.
    July 16th, 2010 at 07:30pm
  • Rissa_Lynn

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    Lol well I'm glad you did. I'm kind of insecure about my writing other than people I've never met on Mibba and one close friend I don't let people see my work.
    July 15th, 2010 at 11:09pm
  • Rissa_Lynn

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    Thank you, for the poem comment.
    July 14th, 2010 at 06:21am
  • xxMyDestinyxx

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    Ur welcome :)
    July 5th, 2010 at 08:56pm
  • Lady Jessa

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    It's ok. You''re welcome! =)
    July 4th, 2010 at 03:20pm
  • whiskey rivers.

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    The story itself is a bit "out there", so don't feel to crazy for your thoughts. I feel insane for writing something like that down, especially since I already know how it's going to end.
    April 25th, 2010 at 10:13pm
  • whiskey rivers.

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    You are wrong, but that's okay. I wanted people to interpret it and I'm glad to see that you have. All that means is that when you find out the truth you can come by and slap me in the face (: I really want my readers to hate me, especially with this story. When it reaches the end, I want people to punch themselves for not realizing the truth sooner.

    Dixon has been updated, too! (:
    April 25th, 2010 at 10:06pm
  • whiskey rivers.

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    I just posted a new story (: And Dixon may be updated later on today or tonight, depends on how inspired I get...it's really starting to irk me that nobody has asked where Rylee came from, so I'm thinking I'll make that a bit more obvious in the next chapter. I don't know though, I'm undecided.
    April 25th, 2010 at 06:38pm
  • whiskey rivers.

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    I am pretty awesome aren't I? XP
    I love you too (:
    Thanks for your comments!
    April 25th, 2010 at 05:06pm
  • CherishTheStorm

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    Haha yup! : ) I saw
    April 15th, 2010 at 01:13am