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  • Mogar.

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    I know the rules of writing. Not entirely sure why, but you must have taken something wrong, because all the speech is separated into new paragraphs for new speakers. Never were there more than one person at a time talking.

    I usually do go into more detail, but I felt less was more, sometimes more detail will ruin a story.

    The thing about A//N is that you don't HAVE to read them. There are moments when I don't read them. What is the point of going through more than you need to when 99% of the people reading your story, skips the author's note anyway?

    All in all, thank you for the comment.
    September 14th, 2012 at 09:38pm
  • JustThinking

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    Haha xD
    September 8th, 2012 at 11:42pm
  • JustThinking

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    No worries, I'll find the money for a plane ticket for that! Even though the phone number thing and maybe an email address would be good too xD

    hehe good!! ;D
    September 8th, 2012 at 11:06pm
  • JustThinking

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    Oh and introduce me! ^^
    September 8th, 2012 at 10:03pm
  • JustThinking

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    Understandable! And if you do, please send photographic or video proof! Otherwise I won't believe you ;)
    September 8th, 2012 at 10:02pm
  • JustThinking

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    O.o and now I'm jealous of you.. Funny how that works xD
    September 8th, 2012 at 09:58pm
  • JustThinking

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    I'm guessing a little? IDK.. do I get some choices to pick from?? xD

    My class is the international, social and political science class (I think it's both social and political.. but I'm not sure what the subject translates too xD) We have been talking about this trip since first year and now it's a reality, thanks to our teacher (who was the one to bring it up in the first place)^^
    September 8th, 2012 at 09:50pm
  • JustThinking

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    I'm going to Kampala, Uganda at the end of the month with my class.. so that easily destracts my mind from time to time xD but I'm looking forward to that or those posts then! to your blog! ^^
    September 8th, 2012 at 09:18pm
  • Barbielovesyou

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    It was no problem, and thanks for the advice. :)
    September 8th, 2012 at 12:29am
  • JustThinking

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    Thanks, just got bitched out because I said Northern Ireland was part of the uk and got curious.
    September 7th, 2012 at 02:29pm
  • JustThinking

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    Kind of random question, isn't northern Ireland part of the uk? :/ or is it a state of its own or?? :s
    September 7th, 2012 at 01:43pm
  • xxemergencyy

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    Yes ma'am. I've read a couple others but they don't appeal to me. I like yours. How special do you feel now? Lol.
    September 7th, 2012 at 11:56am
  • JustThinking

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    and since I can't comment or vote on your trailer, I'll just let you know here:

    IT IS AWESOME! :D THUMBS UP!
    September 6th, 2012 at 08:51pm
  • JustThinking

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    well I'm now subscribed to your channel! ^^ can't wait to stalk through it though x)
    September 6th, 2012 at 08:44pm
  • Valiente

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    Keeping it plain and simple? Good idea. I must warn you though; if there is going to be dialogue in French, I'll be forced to use Google Translate
    September 5th, 2012 at 01:27am
  • Valiente

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    Oh my bloody Honey Buns, yes!

    Now the question is, how will we make this whole cross-over thing work?
    September 4th, 2012 at 03:27am
  • Valiente

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    I'm thinking she should be a Paris-born woman, living in London, who's visiting her sick mother in her hometown. Her publisher doesn't want her to fall behind on her work, so she works while aiding her mother. She meets the French dude at a marketplace while shopping for food.

    I love the summary! Mr. Green
    September 4th, 2012 at 12:44am
  • Valiente

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    Hellskies yes! We'll need characters and a good summary
    September 3rd, 2012 at 09:49pm
  • Valiente

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    This would be an excellent story to write
    September 3rd, 2012 at 08:37pm
  • Valiente

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    Bloody hell, yes! I love it Cute
    September 3rd, 2012 at 07:55pm