Hahaha, pretty much means, make sure your tenses agree with each other. If you're writing in the past, make sure all your verbs are in the past.
eg. "Harry Potter walked to the store, and then he steals an apple." Which would be wrong.. :P Sorry to sound like a teacher, but do you get what I mean?
Well, no offense, I don't care who Sam is, if I were him [which would be weird, lol], I wouldn't want my significant other that I'm going to marry be in love with someone else. And the not finding out about it until after we're married would be the worst.
Now, I'm not saying Hey, do something. But it's not right to lead TWO people on at once. I know you don't mean to, but it's not fair to any of you. Sam, Kelly, or yourself.
As for your ex... he was your first love. That's understandable. But you gave up on him for a reason. Distance was a reason, but try to think back and compare. Are you happier than you were with your ex? Does your fiance bring out the best in you and "cheer" you on to do things [like pushing you into doing a good job at something or doing homework/studying]? Can you tell your fiance your innermost thoughts, dreams, and fears? Think on these questions a bit. And you can switch it around and ask yourself these questions about ex. I just used your fiance as the main example. If this doesn't help, lemme know. I'll see what I can think up for you.
You'll get sweetie, hun, honey, dear, kid, and probably other terms of endearment that'll just fly out of my mouth, or rather from my fingertips. Get over it, get used to it. And yes, I realize "kid" isn't endearing, but it still goes with the group.
Well, except for those rought patches, it sounds like you had a nice Christmas/New Year's. I'm glad you had some happiness :D
Did Santa bring you anything this year? Were you a good girl? lol
HAHAHAHAHA!!! If anything, it may be You who needs the warning! I am the one who makes my friends say, "Oooooh...kay then..." even after years of knowing me and should be used to it by now. I'm pretty weird, or so everyone feels the need to tell me on a regular basis. Trust me, hun [*snickers*], it'll be alright.
I'm so sorry, sweetie, for taking so much time to reply to you. I was away with family for the holidays. Little, if any, internet connection. Things are back to normal now.
I never said you were idiotic nor implied that. I was just telling you my conditions, silly. I think it'll be interesting to visit a Canadian :P
Hello. Im just askng around to find people interested in joining my prewrite contest. You can enter anything you want but his has to be something you've already written and posted here. Heres a link to the contest:
http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/152708/
There are five catagorie's you can enter into chaptered stories, one shots, songfic, poetry, and drabbles. You can enter in as many entries as you'd like
Im also looking for at least two judges for each catagorie. You can enter and be judge but cannot be a judge for a catagorie your in.
Not to sound weird or ungrateful, but you're going to invite a complete and total stranger from the internet to come see you? Stranger danger? Y'know, for all you know, I'm a serial killer who's using this site to talk to young girls... Not that I am, I'm just trying to make a point to you.
I wouldn't mind coming to see you but only if we keep up our friendship for the next year and a half. Also, I am in college, so, I can't leave until I finish my finals for that semester.
That aside, I think a visit to Canada would be kinda cool... :D
I'm so sorry I haven't been able to talk to you or read your work these last few days. As soon I finished the last of my finals, I basically collapsed. Sleep, eat, repeat. I am done hibernating now. I just wanted to make sure you didn't feel like I was blowing you off : )