It sounds interesting enough, but I can't say I know what you mean by it. What exactly is it supposed to be describing? It may only be hard for me to understand because it is out of the rest of the story.
Actually they burn my stomach xD My favourite food is either the pink tropical starbursts, or peanutbutter and jelly. All mixed in a bowl. No bread. :D
Thankyou(:
I like yours tooo.
Exspecially the younger ones >:D
bahhaha.
Well I'm just attempting to get ready fort school to start;
gaaaaaaaah :P I wish summer was longeerr.
Other than that I went to a hiking thing yesterday.
There was a petting Zoo :D
I touched a reindeeerr (:
Be jealllousss ;D
Dude That sucks.
I have the memory of an elephant xD
Anyways;
I don't know we were talking about scaring kids in school, acting random or some shit like that ;D
But I was goin through my friends and saw you so,
Whats up?(:
And well..I've been wanting to write more short stories to post on here, but this computer is always being used by someone else, I can't write in the short time I am on here...Soo...I'm trying to save up for another computer so I can, but who knows how long that will be.
And awesome! I'm looking forward to reading it if you post it =)