Thank you. ^-^ and yes, I did. I love that manga! And I do take several things from it, but starting off from the second book, I start adding a bunch of my own doings. :D
Thanks for the comment! I do recall once accidentally saying Travis instead of Trevor but I thought I fixed that. And I don't recall mixing Christa and Clarice up. I mean, they are two different people. I guess I'll have to go through and reread to see what happened.
What about chapter 22 did you find confusing? Is it a format issue or a plot thing? Please let me know so I can fix it :)