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Oh I totally undersand the protectiveness. I have tons of stories that I've written but I won't post them on here. How Could this happen to me just started out as an idea that progressed lolz. and yeah I could check out your stories. I've actually been looking for something to read over my christmas break.

thanks for the comment I didn't realize anyone was still reading it... but yeah I am putting it through an editing session because in six months I'm going to try to have it published... but I'll probably wind up reposting it to see what the readers think. I'm glad you like it though and in no way did I take it as an insult because I was completely excited around the last two chapters because that was the first story I ever finished.

Lol thats true, I find it also weird how most guys are afraid to right romantic scenes, you know? I have no problems with it lol
Most of the girls stories i read never seem to mind when i give them constructive criticism though.
Ok i shall do my best to read your stories ^_^

Haha, dude, if my folks knew half of the stuff I've done in the past 7 months they'd beat me silly.
;)
R rated movies (my parents are wicked strict about that), they think I've never seen one, when I've seen atleast 5 in the past 4 months, 3 of which they denied me permission to see, drinking, which is something else they obviously wouldn't approve of me doing, and just the way I act in general, and also teaching my brother the funner side of swearing, he's ten, he should know by now, I was "proficient" by the time I was 8. It was about time he learned, now all he needs is to know the right and wrong time TO swear, but we're working on it.
:D
hehe.
All the good movies are R though, I just can't help myself.

Oh my god.
You poor sugarless girl.
I feel pain and pity for your soul.
:O

Only when I lack the average amount of sugar.
The key word in the explanation was DEFICIENCY!
XD
hehe.
It happens quite often actually...why?

pshh no. lack of sugar. I'm going into sugar deficiency.
D:

Haha oh.
:)
I have a headache.
:(

XD
Okay.
And by the by, "oc" stands for original character. So I don't know. Add in some dude/chick for funn basically.
XD

Not really no...
they kick plenty of ass already.
:D
Maybe toss in an oc or two if you feel like it.
But it's fine the way it is.
hehe.
I feel like such a rebel.
I'm supposed to be cleaning right now.
:)

hey thanks for your comments on Blood Stained. your comments are actually really helpful, which is an AWESOME change from the others people comment lol
Sure, i'll read some of your stories, any suggestions?

We just got home, I went out to eat with my mom, pops, bro, and uncle to celebrate my birthday, we went to olive garden. I love me some Italian food.
XD
Before that I did my weekly community service and stuff, and now I'm putting the new moon soundtrack onto my iTouch.

I'll try to read them tonight or tomorrow!
:)
Whatchu doin there, for the sake of being nosy.

haha, actually, todays my 15th birthday!
XD
And I'll enjoy them tomorrow!
I'll be doing hw for awhile.
and why not?

ther weretypos?
XD
...yes I was mocking you.

Haha, yeah, I guess that would put a damper on things!
Hopefully she'll eventually see through it and kiss Remus because, well, it would be simply adorable. ;)

x

Whoo!
I feel uber special!
xD
Drunk again?!
What kind of example are you setting for my young impressionable mind?
;D

Hey, I was wondering if you could read my story Love is a Battlefield? I could use some feedback!

You probably insulted me on Silver's comment page for her new story but I just wanted to tell you that I'm just not a person who likes profanity. I do have friends who swear and I'm not holding it against anyone but my 'you-know-what' has nothing to do with anything.

There's nothing wrong with not liking profanity as people did get around with the use of profanity before arrogant teenagers came along. If you can't describe something without profanity it can be seen as immature, if profanity is necessary in the story then by all means include it.

I didn't know profanity was 'part of the character' if I knew I wouldn't have involved my 'you-know-what' as you politely called it.

Okayyyyyy,
XD
I'll check it.
I really want the next Me & Thee though.
Remus is my bitch,
for realioz.
;D