Heey, I just wrote a new story!
It's based on a dream I had, I'm trying to write it all before I forget it, haha.
You should go check it out.. It's called: Lie To Me.
It's a Romance story. (:
Chapter seventeen, closer to the ending.
Where you said, "Somewhere between studying I started thinking about Emma. And how her little nose scrunched when she laughed, and her how here eyes glistened in the sunlight. "
I enjoy your story Kentucky Skies.
The plot is beautiful and the sort of love story that catches my heart.
There's a few grammar issues and you called Lauren[the new girl, I think that's her name] Emma[or something] at one point. I was tired at the time that I read it but if you'd like I can go and take note of the very small grammatical errors.
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