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Thanks for the comment! The explained the themes of the masquerade balls in chapter six but I'll tell you here. The first ball is animal, the second is black and white, and the third is a traditional Venetian ball.

Yah! It's completely fixed now. Check the newest update. :P

OH CRAP! I think I completely skipped over that part and forgot to post it! SHOOOOOOT I am so sorry!

lolz Well, I'm not sure what the plan is... I think I've just dug myself into a hole with that one. xD Aww And I thought I made it obvious why Shaun and Ryo were acting so strange. =) And remember after Caleb told everyone he was going to Italy, Kara said they were over, and then Caleb gave her the ring?

hey howve you been?
did you give up on your story??? - cole

Haha, I'm in California.
:)
Yeah, it's night sorta over here too.
See you later!
:D

:D
Frieeeeeend.
*starts breathing heavily*
Sorry, that sounded a bit stalker-ish.
xD
How are you today?
:)

Awwwww, I must ask you to be my friend.
:D
I'm Lesli, (of course)
and you areee?
Sorry, I'm too lazy to look for myself right now.
xD

Oh my god, you're so sweet!
:D
You make me want to cry right now you're so nice.
Ahhhh, you really liked it that much?!

I know exactly what you're talking about. The main computer in my house decided not to work recently. Take as much time as you need.

Thanks for the comment! It made me laugh. I'm hopefully going to update regularly now.Still waiting for an update on To the Hand of Clawed Fingers!

I updated! Proud of me? I am! I’ll start working on the next chapter as soon as I can.

I know! I feel so bad! I’m trying so hard to update. I got sidetracked by a fan fiction. I plan on posting the fan fiction tonight. Hopefully that will allow me to work on my other stuff.

Thanks! God, I'm lucky I had just posted the chapter with the mistake on it, if you hadn't told me as soon as you did, I would look like an idiot, even though I am one ;)

Your right! Thank you soo much! I just realized that. I had written it over a few days, not feeling like writing, and completly forgot about it. Okay, i'll change it. Thanks!

Thanks you always have such good constructive critisism :) ... I'm changing a few bits noow but there is no need to re read the plot is basically the same.

xx

Thank you for the comment!

The point was to introduce a new place and get away from the houses. To show that there is more to the city. Also, to show that Dawn can get so close to Jason but never get to talk to him. Something always keeps them away. I guess I didn't do so good of job showing that.

thanks again for the comment :)
i'm glad it as least making sense, it sometimes gets confusing when you put your imagination down on paper, well laptop.
any way thanks xx

lol sorry my update lapse is kind of annoying.
thank you for your story comment :]

hey thanks for the comment... i'm going to put a bit of her looks in the next chapter or so!!! Do you think i should put it in another perspective or keep it in her pov thanks for the tip like i say gonna work on it xx