haha i like the story alot lol it took me forever to read it because i was fallin asleep... not that it was boring i just havent been sleepin well haha ily WRITE MORE PLEEZE!!!
Thanks for the comment. And I think I’m getting a little better about detail, right? I’ve started to write it out by hand instead of typing it and it allows me to actually think about what I’m writing instead of just getting it down faster. ^_^
Thanks for the comment, and yeah, I’m aware of the holes. I’m fixing them soon. A friend just really wanted to read it and I had no other way of getting it to her. But thanks, it helped me out. ^^
hey thanks for the comment! I completely missed that. I'll rewrite something in the first chap. but i filled in that characted description thing. Any way hope you have an awesome week xx
Hey. :)
I'm Chelsea.
I've decided to try to whore out my story, so to speak.
It's a fan fiction about Oli Sykes as a vampire; rated NC-17.
I would LOVE for you to check it out. :)
Comment and tell me what you think.
Please and thank you.
<3
http://stories.mibba.com/read/213397/Scream-For-Me/
Quizilla has gone downhill these past few years. All the stories seem to be the same. Good ones are hard to find. (No offense for the Jonas Brothers comment. I dislike them as well.)
Actually, I just finished re-reading some chapters from the Cinderella story and finally have a few ideas for the next chapter. I'll either update this week or next week.
By the way, I loved your last update. The bickering between the two was funny.